Touch at one A.M ..........verse

I wearily wondered of starlight in this half sleep
turning and tossing slumbering forth
drifted slowly into a half sleep half awake
and then fully into erotic dream
My arm reaches comfortably across the
flannel sheets of winter
and the dream begins to unravel
As outside the rains rage and rage again
reality however begins to awaken
There is the soft flesh of a woman there too
the curves of breast and the fullness of
shadowed touch
sleepily at first and then sexual
Without becoming even aware of it
touch becomes warmth and warmth becomes
a sound
sound then becomes a steady rhythmic movement
like a bow of a cello or viola
in a woman's hand
And then we are in each others hands
hearts and tastes
and heaven becomes the night
And then night becomes a satiated
world of a sleep world
once again




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Nellieanna 13 months ago from TEXAS

Quite descriptive, Ed. Beautifully formed.


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saddlerider1 13 months ago

Whew, that was some HOT dream. But you know, it's not uncommon for us men to have erotic dreams. Maybe due to us either being alone for too long, in my case, divorced now 15 years, I certainly miss the scent of a woman by my side. Much of it has been of my own choosing, I have tended to be more reclusive these past years, not letting anyone enter my heart. But it's a wonderful feeling no doubt, to be awoken to the scent and caress of a woman, even if it's only in a dream. Nicely done my friend, now wake up and go take a cold one:-))


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Ericdierker 13 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Dang it, I should of gotten all - well you know, reading this. Instead it just made me love the rain, my wife and life altogether more.

Tʼáá íiyisíí ahéheeʼ


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lisavanvorst 13 months ago from New Jersey

Beautiful and romantic. Well written. Thank you for sharing.


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manatita44 13 months ago from london

Deep and interesting one. Cool journey!


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always exploring 13 months ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful dreams allow us to think about time and hope..


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ahorseback 13 months ago Author

Nellieanna , Thank you my dear lady !


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ahorseback 13 months ago Author

HI Saddlerider , Sure is good to see you back Ken ! Okaayyy! a cold one it is !


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ahorseback 13 months ago Author

Eric- my friend speaks Navajo ! Thank you ......I thinks!


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ahorseback 13 months ago Author

Lisavanvorst , Thank you my lady !


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ahorseback 13 months ago Author

Manatita , Thanks kind sir !


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ahorseback 13 months ago Author

Hi Ruby , me thinks the yearning never ends , Thanks for reading !

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