Drowning

I knew I was drowning
When I was going back home
On that train ride
The clouds in the sky
Masked any blue underneath
It was empty 
Only a few people 
On the train
My heart was sinking
Because I felt very alone
Love sick
Confused
Where was my life going
School was over for me then
I knew this was the end
It broke my heart
Into a million pieces
My mind was trapped
In its own
Isolated prison

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btrbell 2 weeks ago from Mesa, AZ

Sad and relatable. Well done. I'm feeling it with you.


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always exploring 2 weeks ago from Southern Illinois

This reminds me of a train ride I took. It was a sad time for me too.


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carolinemd21 4 days ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Btrbell. :)

Thank you Ruby. :)

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