I knew I was drowning
When I was going back home
On that train ride
The clouds in the sky
Masked any blue underneath
It was empty 
Only a few people 
On the train
My heart was sinking
Because I felt very alone
Love sick
Where was my life going
School was over for me then
I knew this was the end
It broke my heart
Into a million pieces
My mind was trapped
In its own
Isolated prison

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btrbell 2 months ago from Mesa, AZ

Sad and relatable. Well done. I'm feeling it with you.

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always exploring 2 months ago from Southern Illinois

This reminds me of a train ride I took. It was a sad time for me too.

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carolinemd21 2 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Btrbell. :)

Thank you Ruby. :)

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