EIGHTH INSTALLMENT OF ...THE LAKE...by b. Malin

END OF CHAPTER 3

The next day after Robert had left for work, Sarah decided to call up Mac, her boss at the Newspaper. "Hey Mac, it's Sarah I want to run something by you, see what you think? And so she filled him in on the the suicide of Danielle Jordan. Mac was silent for a moment, "So you think she was killed? Even though the case has been closed for almost two years and the police ruled it suicide... What have you got for proof, that it wasn't"? "I don't Mac, call it a gut feeling, but I'd like to interview some of the towns people that knew her...see if I can fill in some of the blanks...I just need your approval to write it as a human interest piece". "Sure, Sarah, why not but just be careful, because if it wasn't a suicide, and it was murder...that person isn't go to sit idly by while you hunt him down and have him put behind bars". They said their good by's with Sarah promising to fax a rough draft of her findings.

Sarah was on her way to the Wellington Inn, she had just finished her Yoga class when she saw a young man of medium build, with black wavy hair and almost black piercing eyes going into the Hardware store. Why does he look so familiar? Did she know him...but from where?Without thinking she decided to follow him. She quickly looked around the store, the place wasn't that big...oh where was he...ah, he was over near the hammer and nails. She approached him silently, pretending to be looking for something. He startled her when he spoke, "Can I help you miss...you look confused". "Oh, Sarah signed, I'm not very good at pretending...I followed you in here because you look like someone I might know...I think". She felt herself blushing and realizing how foolish she must sound. He smiled warmly as he said, "I guess I just have that kind of a face." "Yeah, maybe that's it" Sarah said smiling back. "Are you new here"? he said. "Kind of, she replied, we bought the Jordan house out at the lake". "Really, I helped build parts of it...yes, that deck was all my work" he said sounding proud. She could detect a slight accent. "Where are you from", I hear a slight a slight Spanish accent. "I am from Spain. I just got back from my country, my mother took ill, and I went home to take care of her... she has since died...and now I am back here once more." "I see"...Suddenly she felt excited, the reporter in her was starting to kick in. He must have know both the Jordans.

"I'm starting to interview people who came in contact with Mrs. Jordan, and certainly you must have...making that big deck and all...she rushed on...I'm just wondering what she was like, I know that she was a successful writer and new mother, but what kind of a person was she"? He smiled softly, and said, "so you think a carpenter like me would personally know such a woman"? He seemed amused. "Who else have you interviewed"? "No one really she sighed, "The truth of the matter is...she took a deep breath, I don't believe that Danielle, Mrs. Jordan committed suicide..."You don't"? he replied looking surprised. "Why that happens in my country all the time...let it go"...He now seemed to be waving her off. "I've got to go now...he was saying, I've got a job to do", he said as he started to walk to the front of the store where the cashier was. Sarah stood there watching him go, feeling like she'd made a fool of herself. Surely she was a better reported then what she just displayed.

"Hey, she called, as she rushed up to where he stood waiting on line. What time are you free this afternoon"? "I'm busy all this week and I'd really rather not be involved". he replied back. "I could keep it quiet, just between you and me...she felt he knew something. He looked silently at her, almost like he was studying her features. "Ok, he sighed...give me your phone number, I'll call you next week, but no one is to know...understood...I could loose my job here, and I can't afford that. Do you understand"? She nodded her head. Now if you'll excuse me, he said as the clerk handed him his change. "Here's my phone number" Sarah said as she handed him a small piece of paper. "Nice meeting you, hey what's your name? Mine's Sarah". "Mine's Jose" he said as he put her number in his shirt pocket and walked out the door. Well now I feel better, she thought to herself, like the good reporter that I am. She'd keep her promise not to tell anyone of their meeting including Robert...He'd kill her she laughed to herself if he found out what she was up to.

The sun was shinning brightly as she ran across to the Inn to pick out a delicious dinner to serve to Robert that night. Before entering the Inn, she felt the baby kick for the very first time and couldn't wait to share it with Robert, as she called him on his cell. He was delighted and hoped they were both staying out of trouble. "Of course we are darling...we're just out for a stroll downtown, and I'm about to pick up dinner".  "Buy lamb chops honey, with those wonderful sweet potatoes and apple sauce and if they have brownies with that fudge sauce...hey I gotta go, I've got a client due in five minutes. Love ya," click and he was gone.

Sarah felt happy, oh so happy as she went into the Inn to place her order.

To be continued...


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richtwf 5 years ago

Ah there was just one brief mention of food at the very end! Fortunately I have just had a little bite!

As always I enjoyed the read and it's moving at a good pace and keeps the reader's interest too.

Excellent job and look forward to the next part.

God bless.


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arb 5 years ago from oregon

I'm going to have put time aside to catch up! Or maybe you could slow down. Great job.


Cheryl Kapelner-Champ 5 years ago

Am really into it, from our new Mystery Writer!

Love & Peace Always,

Mother Lightning

of [thepeacegarden.blogspot.com]


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Keep it coming. Up and awesome..


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

The food part was for you Rich, Ha, Ha...But seriously, thanks so much for continuing to read and make your constructive comments...Much appreciated.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Arb, I'm so gad to have your interest, please catch up the end is near...


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Hey Mother Lightning, thanks for taking the time to come over from the piece garden to give me your thoughts...always appreciated.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Hey my favorite breakfastpop, lady, thanks for your encouragement!


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Pixienot 5 years ago from Clarksville, Indiana

Are all of the characters in place yet? You said the end is near. Oh dear. Oh dear!


SuizyQ 5 years ago

You my friend have such a beautiful talent! I can not wait for more!!!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Just about...but there will be some surprises along the way. Thanks so much Pixienot, for hanging in there.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Hey SuizyQ , thank you so much for your approval...it does mean a lot of me. Hope the final chapters won't disappoint.


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arb 5 years ago from oregon

Would love to catch up b. but leaving on a 21 day cruise tomorrow and no lap top-she wants all my attention!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Have a wonderful time arb! Hope you'll drop by when you return.


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epigramman 5 years ago

....well I am forgoing my cruise and no lap top to be here with you and continue this very intriguing story and that is the key operative word here - it's in the intrigue in which you have excelled while writing this story!!!!!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank, Epigramman and so the intrigue begins...watch out.


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Pixienot 5 years ago from Clarksville, Indiana

Hang in there? I'm hanging on... you so much have my interest.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Pixienot my friend, the suspense will start to build.


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50 Caliber 5 years ago from Arizona

Hypnotizing writing urging one to read forward voted up all keys it's getting more toward an area where one begins to guess at whats next, and I'll bet it is not what I think, 50


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

I hope I've got you fooled...read on.

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