EYES : in depthness


The knock your eye has, opens the door of same choice,

When your eye longs for the sky, You fly within with your dice.


Into the clouds, singing freely

The birds don't claim to make there nest

Onto the shore, with the waves,

The fishes don't, claim to take any rest.


The drop of this heart, into your eyes,

Creates the world of joy and love,.

The thrill of leaving, Not here lies,

Lesson, I learned in your love.


Deep into ocean, the pearls got shine,

Painstaking search, makes it find,

To the glory of your Love, when I fallen,

I made it sink, and you made it kind.



I could come out, i knew to swim

But i denied, knowing the pearl within,

And now it shines, in me and my Love.

I suggest this pain, to have in your search.



Walk with breeze and feel the jack,

Walk against and loose your track,

Love into your eyes speak.

I had come , not to pass by your street.



Lost in your eyes, I got a smile,

With my heart and lips both got tie,

I died in you and in your eyes,

Alive and happy still , to my surprise,



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Antonio Sotelo 5 years ago from El Paso, Texas

You have a beautiful way with words, Jabalpur. Good work!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks Antonio....not only words but i try to write conceptually and scientifically too.


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Lady_E 5 years ago from London, UK

Beautiful, deep Poem.

Thanks for sharing.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks.....and welcome Lady_E


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epigramman 5 years ago

....sheer unadulterated pure and blissful design of words ..... my poetic princess!!!!

lake erie time 5:50 am ontario canada - summer and fall are currently fighting over the month of September - I think 'fall' may be winning - so nice to meet you and thank you so much for your endorsement of my humble little hubspace and coming from such a terrific writer/thinker like yourself that is quite a thrill and honor!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

blessed also epigramman........

having ur sweet comment in my hub page..and really thanks for ur statement of poetic princess...in India its summer and i feel very much longing for such a pleasant moments in environment

so i was making painstaking imaginations which took a form of wonderful poem


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Photos and the poem compliment words and pictures. Wonderful word-picture.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks vinaya...ur profile picture made me active to follow u and share my some of hard works...plz read all other hubs too.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

These are very clever and soulful words. It shows you have the feeling inside you... if you can be a beauty who can have a broken heart then it makes you human....


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

the sunurban...thanks for comment..but how can u say that beauty and broken heart are interlinked to be a human.yes i have feelings too but there is no rule to these feelings i thing. the circumstances and the state of mind differs and changes often.

so don't know what moves one..and what not.


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The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

It means that someone is beautiful on the outside at times can put themselves on a pedestal where they only live to be served and do not allow themselves to be vulnerable to another.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Ah...delighted sunurban....thanks again

beauty is always the reason to inspire every heart, some sings and some dance, some serves as social servants and some becomes writers..Love eye is the source to every Beauty,perceived through a golden heart


"Quill Again" 5 years ago

Very well written... love the use and blend of the words... powerful

Blessings


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks again quill.......blessed me too...so much cared and loved...pondering day and night made me mobile to write

words itself is the form of God and when made system within does miracles in our blood worms..

welcome always...


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

You have an wonderful way with words and you express them wonderfully. Your hubs are so powerful... and like a coffee... its all in the blend... :)


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks ASTRA....

i will take care to maintain the status of my hubs...


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

You write as effortlessly as a flying gull over the sands of time. They are but like a summer breeze that lifts the sand and lays it to rest gently near your feet. The eyes are a powerful and very deep expression of our inner souls.

Lovers find and lose each other in them, like a well they are so deep and feed our thirst for love. I felt the power in your verse, enjoying and devouring every word. Thank you for sharing, I am happy to be here to read and comment. Voted Up and beautiful.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

a lot of grace i received in form of ur comment. Its really not less then an achievement to have such an insight from an experienced , talented and artist person like you.. I really wonder about ur flow all over hub pages on different hubs motivating and liking the contents

and today i feel blessed too..thank you very much


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penofone 4 years ago

Winning a world apart is not what this poem encapsulates.... it is great to see that harmony exists without function of hatred in this poem it is good to see that love is great and kind to menace... A world apart form and function...try to tell me more!

Anish B.B.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

yeah anish thanks...getting to it in my next poem


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penofone 4 years ago

I have nothing to say about my poetry wish you well on your next poem it is not the nothingness that follows shirkla....is it true to behave in worship of Sri Rama>?

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