Each a Place (a poem of acceptance)

The universal creation...
The universal creation...
From the time of all creation...
From the time of all creation...
The life force we are all so given by the creator...
The life force we are all so given by the creator...
He helps make our days less strife laden and happier..
He helps make our days less strife laden and happier..
As we slumber in the night, he watches over us...
As we slumber in the night, he watches over us...
He receives our spirits both the good and the bad...
He receives our spirits both the good and the bad...
Our lives are a divine gift...
Our lives are a divine gift...


His, from the deepest of the oceans,

Beyond the canopy of all space,

Each of God's entities, are his own,

To have their most special place.


Every creature, child, to live their lives,

In such goodness or disgrace,

As some day each one shall stand,

Before the maker, face to face.


The genius of our master creator,

And of his most gifted hands,

Paid tribute in a symphony,

orchestrated, of Milky way bands.


Celestial music, such a universal grace,

And for all the angels to embrace,

Helps us find our way, live each day,

To have our own special place.


Our father, God, never to rest at night,

As we slumber, asleep in our beds,

His watchful eye, and by his guiding light,

Of a warming love, he so spreads.


As we express each care, kneel in prayer,

He answers all, in his own way and time,

He prolongs our life, helps ease our strife,

Makes our days we live, sublime.


Our living spirit, that from the lord, we receive,

As a gift to his followers, or those not to believe.

The life force, grand, and for us to understand,

The essence of our faith, in his marvelous plan.







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Each child and creature to have its own special place...
Each child and creature to have its own special place...

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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

The day I learned acceptance is the day I began to turn my life around. You captured it beautifully.


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend. All of us must find our way some day. Thank you for stopping by. whonu


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AngeShearer 2 years ago from Whangarei, Northland

Wow love love love this poem...thankyou soooo much for sharing....here here Billybuc me tooo my best day ever. I just love the pictures you chose too..what a GREAT way to start my day voted beautiful and awesome my friend x


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thank you so much for your kind words my friend. whonu


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tkhonaker 2 years ago from Ohio

Beautiful and captured perfectly.


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MsDora 2 years ago from The Caribbean

Such a big God in control of the universe, and yet so involved in each of our lives. "He answers all, in his own way and time." Awesome!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

"Every creature, child, to live their lives,

In such goodness or disgrace,

As some day each one shall stand,

Before the maker, face to face."

This says it all, whonu. Beautiful piece once again!


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thank you for your support and blessings. whonu


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

My thanks to bravewarrior, tkhonaker, and MsDora, for your kind words. Blessings to each of you. whonu


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grand old lady 2 years ago from Philippines

This would make a wonderful Children's book. If it were printed, I would buy it and read it to my child (she's 23 now, but if she were still a child), every night. I do hope you think about what poems of yours would be lovely children's books. This one is a real winner.


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend. Your kind comments mean a lot. whonu


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

A most wonderful and inspirational poem.


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thank you and blessings. whonu


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teaches12345 2 years ago

Wonderful words. God has helped me through the years to accept myself. Yes, his watchful eye and guidance made me a better person.


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thank you so much my friend. whonu


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aviannovice 24 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Faith can also be in the lives and goodness of you and me.

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