Echo of Perfection

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The sweet trail

That lingers behind

Perfection

Visible to the blind

In every word

In every touch

Purely

Exquisitely

Divine

The caress so light

Leaving tingles

Up the spine

Screaming

With delight

At the utter thought

There is nothing else

To me

This is where

I will stay

A magnetic force

A glimmer

Decadent sway

Sparkle to the eye

Something unrecognizable

Making the heart skip a beat

Leaving it on display

Goes so far deep

All I can say

This is perfection

Under lock and key

Mine

Forever

To hold

To keep


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

That kind of perfection is a wonderful thing to find and hold on to alright! Loved that "decadent sway."


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Caroline. I love the picture..Perfect..


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

what a wonderfully written piece and as X-man stated in his comment i too loved that Decadent sway.. voted awesome


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow Caroline.. my heart is skipping a beat after reading this.. simply beautiful... I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!!

sharing

Debbie


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Mmmmmmmm...soooooo s e x y! Me gusta Caroline! sharing and tweeting!


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Sexy write--but so well done--lovely job!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. So romantic. Great pic. Passing this on.


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi XStatic thank you so much! :)

Hi Ruby thank you so much! :)

Hi Frank thank you so much! :)

Hi Debbie thank you so much! :)

Hi Leslie thank you so much! :)

Hi Audrey thank you so much! :)

Hi Gypsy thank you so much! :)

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