Echo From The Clouds (tanka)

Was it all worth it

Came an echo from the clouds

Floating past the day

Which a dream was built upon

Of another special time


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

yess.. very deep .. had to climb out of this ..!


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

For me, I would have to say it was...worth it.

Hopefully upon reflection it was for you to and for others.

Angels are on the way to you this morning ps


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Dreams of another special time. Fulfulled or unfulfilled?


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Beautiful!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Amazing tanka.

Your words whisper an ever taunting question, "Was it worth it?"

The jury is still out on that one.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Another gem and thanks for sharing.

Eddy.


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Deep and profound.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Lovely.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Poignant, for sure!


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

I felt power in those words. I applaud you.

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