Echo (poem)

An echo of another left behind

The wind recalls the night when it was born

A memory forever now resigned

The dew with which these flowers meet the morn

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The shadow of a song that won’t let go

Still calls the heart to play its part and weep

For souls so lost when magic lost its glow

The sadness in the scent the flowers keep

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Is this the dream the destiny of love

The pain and tears to wash it all away

Just empty rusted sign posts up above

Where plastic covered flowers now do stay

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Oh heart oh soul the sun of promise true

A fresh new endless flower blooms anew

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Yes, love that last line, a fresh new flower blooms anew, leaving those plastic covered fake ones behind, just as the fake love! Really beautiful one here Mh.

Wow, sultry song and video - very powerful!!! Love it very much. I think this is my favorite poem and especially the video I know is my favorite - Not Broken . . . must share.

Voted Way Up. God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Love that is fake is like the plastic flowers. A very beautiful video.

Once again, voted up.


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

You are the master! Reading this makes me ache for what isn't here! The music and picture, as always appropriate! Thank you Martin for another beautiful hub!


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Such a beautiful and lovely poem. 'An echo of another left behind' - what a beautiful thought. The song is lovely also. You really know how to put expression into your words. Another master poem from you - Thank you!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Oh - you have so masterfully triggered that melancholy button in my heart. I'm sure all of us have that someone we can relate this to.


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arb 4 years ago from oregon

Every wilted love, steals something in us, in return for what it comes to plant. Beautiful write hatter! Voted up as always.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

A wonderful echo, indeed.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Thanks for sharing this beautiful masterpiece !


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heavenleigh707 4 years ago from The Invincible Heart of Neverland

I love the flow, the pain, and the hope of this one!!! Beautifully done.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful poetry..The shadow of a song that won't let go. I can relate..Bravo..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Wonderful poem.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Oh heart oh soul the sun of promise true

A fresh new endless flower blooms anew

So beautiful Mhatter and here's to many more to follow.

Eddy.


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Pearldiver 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

My friend... you may well have unwittingly discovered why so many bees commit suicide rather repeat themselves to a flower! Nicely done.. cheers for sharing your talents... PD

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