Bullet to the Brain


The painful things

You said to me

Come and go

Over and over

In my mind



Heart beaten in

Torn apart

Why did it have to happen

This way

I don't want you

To make me cry


I don't want you

To hurt me


All the heartache

Has torn me


Limb to limb

I can't think anymore

I am stuck in

My mind haze




Who I really



Blown through me

Like a bullet

To the brain

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Comments 11 comments

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Oh yes. I remember it well. Thank you for this.

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torrilynn 3 years ago

Thanks for this hub. Intriguing and yet beautiful. Thanks. Voted up.

Valleypoet 3 years ago

An intense write...nicely done:-))

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very intense and emotional indeed..Awesome..

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Ericdierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

No my sweet it is not right to finish a love complete. This hub may harm others, who do not know druthers. I beg you to reconsider in your "normal" brain which to others causes pain. I only see my own daughter reading this fine words spoke and think she is like your described folk.

Please do not romanticize or make appealing such thoughts.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

WOW Voted up and awesome. Powerful and emotional. Like a speeding bullet straight to the heart. Passing this on.

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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

raw, strong, amazing I love it :)

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Gypsy48 3 years ago

Awesome poem. True painful emotion. Voted up.

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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Mhatter thank you for stopping by. :)

Torrilynn thank you for stopping by. :)

Valleypoet thank you fro your kind words. :)

Ruby thank you for your kind words. :)

Eric thanks for stopping by. This poem is using symbolism not romanticizing death in anyway and is not to be taken literally in anyway. :)

Gypsy thank you for your kind words. :)

Frank thank you for your kind words. :)

Gypsy thank you for your kind words. :)

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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

These are unfortunate emotions that all too many can relate to. Thanks for sharing.

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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you for stopping by Shanmarie. :)

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