Emptiness (wish you were here...)

Just because I'm breathing doesn't mean I'm alive.

The sun had flown away
And the moon is now dead
What curse has befallen me
That left my life hanging on a thread.


My heart refused to beat
And pain is softly killing me
Dragging me to the inner depths of despair
Where only silver eyes could see.


Broken spells and hollow dreams
Imprisoned me on my own cell
Wishes and chants
Are nothing in this empty shell.


Clouds do forget
And sky do vanish
Darkness veils my heart
Where loneliness cannot perish.


Love turns to hate
As the sea turns to wave
How can I find my way out
In this scary and unending cave.


For this last time I wish
Colors won't fade
As I find my peace
In heaven where I am laid.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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articlesocean 4 years ago from London, United Kingdom

Very touching poetry. Love it ! Very beautiful !


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Oh! Thank you so much Articlesocean for this very nice message.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Unknown, this is beautiful and so sad.

But, 'the sun will return, the moon will shine bright and love will once again kiss the tears from your eyes' my best wishes to you.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much tobusiness.. and i love your 'the sun will return, the moon will shine bright and love will once again kiss the tears from your eyes' :)so lovely!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

unknown spy - Stirring, heartbreakingly beautiful and so well done. You are one talented poet.

Love reading your works of art.

votin gup


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p10kabhijita 4 years ago from India

You are an amazing poet. Every word makes a strong impact. Keep it up!


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endless sea 4 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

That is sad, but the curse will lift some one will hold your life again inside his arms, heart will beat again like a melodious charm :) Take care


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Great work. Sad but still beautifully expressed.Voted up.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi M. WOW this is a amazing poem, your words whisper of sadness but capture every moment perfectly !

Vote up and more !!! SHARING !!!


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

US, I do believe you might have given Edgar Allen Poe a run for his money on this one except for last verse. I don't think that poor man ever found the peace that you portray so well at the end.Voted up and beautiful.


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Dexter Yarbrough 4 years ago from United States

Sad, but touching poem. Beautiful as well!


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Thank you for this beautiful poem


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi guys! I am so thrilled that you all like my poem. I have to say, I am soooo touched by your kind messages ^;^

ShiningIrishEyes

P10kabhijita

Endless Sea

Vellur

Kashmir

Ann

Dexter

Mhatter


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

Oh dear-This is so terribly sad and heart wrenching. I see the sun and moon shining upon you in the present. Beautiful writing!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

simply beautiful.. love it

voted up

Debbie


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Minnetonka Twin and Debbie,

Thank you so much for appreciating this poem.and for the votes! Thanks!:)


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

Such a peaceful and relaxing poem, yet filled with many emotions and a certain mystery. Great poem by a great writer.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Jon, thank you for the wondeful comment ..well to be honest im also flaterred to called a great writer :)


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Gerg 4 years ago from California

Artfully expressed emotion - very nicely done, unknown spy!

G


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Gerg!


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

My heart bleeds for you, unknown spy! Love yourself and be damned with those who don't see your spirit!


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

Unknown spy...interesting poem...do I detect that you have become a prisoner of your own mind/body and soul ? The poem is well written, but I am concerned for.. you appear to be in a not so happy place..begone negativity, set this prisoner free..


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Bravewarrior and KJ force..thank you for dropping by.

no..it happened once upon a time :)

Thanks for the messages! Have a nice day!

xoxo,m.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Sadness flowing down like a river. Remember the saying every cloud has a silver lining and heads up. Better days are coming.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks for stopping by Gypsy.. :)


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well you are certainly not an unknown poet of perfection as you have many followers and admirers and this is as good as it gets here at the HUB - with a piece I wish I had written - oh so lovely and sublime and created in your very own special language - lake erie time ontario canada - and sending you warm wishes and good energy at 10:31pm


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Epi! I am so thrilled to read this message of yours. Oh thank you so much!


bluesea 4 years ago

very heart touching


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Esther Earl 4 years ago

Very beautiful and so touchy.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Bluesea and Esther, thank you for reading and for the message.


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sikandar khalid 4 years ago

owsam


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Cathleena Beams 4 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

Great poem - I love the last line where peace at last is found in heaven. No more darkness or loneliness can befall and the captive is set free.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Sikandar and Cath, my heart says thank you for the wonderful comments.


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Sonny Ellar 4 years ago from Saudi Arabia

This is beautiful! a piece that no one cannot relate.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi there Sonny! thank you so much for the comment.


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sikandar khalid 4 years ago

you're welcome and in friendship there is no need of thanks friend's want


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Sikandar. Really appreciate you stopping by and read this :)


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DAWNEMARS 4 years ago from The Edge of a Forest in Europe

Pretty, moving words. Thanks for sharing this with us all.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Dawne..Thank you for reading. Really appreciate it much.


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

Another lovely but sad poem, but lovely still! Love the speech!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow thank you so much.. Yeah, its kinda sad though..


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ashish04joshi 4 years ago from India

Well written, spy! I loved "silver eyes"...

'up' and 'beautiful'


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Ash. Thank you!


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ashish04joshi 4 years ago from India

My pleasure, spy...This poem reminds me of one of my own...way back.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Im so glad to meet you here.

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