Ending Of My Soul (poem)

The morning music breaks the ghastly grip

Which runs along the shadows of the night

Those specters which my dying heart invite

To dance along those moments which I slip

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Each teardrop flows to flame a mad delight

What once was Joy the teeth of never strip

What once was me confusion takes its nip

The moon’s sweet glow is now a blesséd blight

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The promises of starlight take their toll

In dark’s domain beyond the evermore

Where I am doomed to search my pain for why

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I still recall the ending of my soul

When darkness took its place there at my door

She never even said the word goodbye

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, me, this one is the so very sad and filled with much pain. I don't know, but I can imagine a lot of nights are pure hell no doubt.

Hugs and love, Faith Reaper


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

O, dear sweet Martin, the pain reaches out to me as I feel this sorrow. It is as if the culmination of the pain and sorrow of many have melded into this one song of sadness. Truly I do think this expresses how I felt those many many years ago when my love left...

Sending blessings and Angels your way ps


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

This hurts, but it's beautiful nonetheless. You know how to go to the deepest places Martin. ~Cat


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Love shouldn't be painful, but it often is.


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Definitely one of the saddest things I've read lately. *sigh* I keep finding the sad ones this morning.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Oh, such sadness and sorrow!

You need to be on better meds, my friend.

You live in CA. I thought just about anyone could get some of that

feel good whacky backy.

Read Bill's book. It will get you in a great frame of mind!! :-)

Smiles,

DJ.


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phdast7 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Very nicely done, full of pain and angst.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up. Very well expressed and emotionally felt.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Good poem filled with brilliant expression of the end of a soul


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Pamela99 3 years ago from United States

So sad and goodbyes are always sad. You have manged to put this even and the feelings into a beautiful poem.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 3 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Nice job. Effective use of rhythm and rhyme.


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Fossillady 3 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

So sad, it took me to a time when I felt abandoned and cheated by my lover . . . don't really want to go back there though, lol. Hope all is well, Kathi :o)


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ah, the pain of desertion. You captured the essence so well.

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