Endless It Seems

 

 

 

Naked smoking dope laying on your back

smack this b*tch do that shit load your clip

pricking finger's and stabbing veins

cut me pretty and f*ck my brain's

head full of bullets marked for dead.

murder me beautiful cut me kiss me

and hate me pretty lover.

paint me black and take my heart

and spleen from the ice box's rack.

put my eyes on ice while you lie

and stay so tight.

your moon is red and hers is red

and his is red, but mine is so f*cking

Yellow

Your picking guts with this stick of life

your road kill is getting cold honey.

eat up so you can grow up

C*nt dirty c*nt cut that c*nt that dirty c*nt.

here's the crow isnt he pretty he eats the dead

your a dove and you bleed green

your wound's aren’t healing ill pick them open.

I wont let you heal your not worthy of death

not just yet your way to cute to cry

don’t spill on my skin the acid of your mind.

keep it in your religion its dirty and with out time

your old and I’m getting younger your voice is fading away

into the hallways of regret your o so pathetic

in your own gorgeous way.

how do you do it sweet heart

how do you pluck away at my feathers

of pain o how do you cry out

into the river of pain.

stop I can not float in this place

I’m not ready an neither are you

o cruel woman cant you be with

yours and let me be with mine

whom has the glass eye and whom

wishes to die take this poison out

of mine and put it deep down inside.

your a lie.

this can not be you know this right?

you can not be this way you must have let me go

for I was sure of it

done with your filth

your as bad as swine

and dirty

your sick

your death

your a

f*cking

flower.

Comments 22 comments

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blackreign2012 6 years ago

well damn.. rant much? lol just playing. I like it its truly dark rate up on deck ~hugs~


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Joy56 6 years ago

can't say this is one of your best, do not like the language, i am sure it is popular with some, but not me..... maybe i should keep my comments to myself, but i do read all your work


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Good To See

You Outside

Of The Box


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lalesu 6 years ago from south of the Mason-Dixon

Pain described through your brand of poetry - not necessarily a pretty thing, but fascinating, nonetheless.


Joy56 profile image

Joy56 6 years ago

out of the box is right, the coffin....... beware.


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Tara Tufford 6 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

You should always express what you are trying to say, exactly how you need to say it, to get it said Awful. It may make others uncomfortable, but writing is a release of so many emotions and feelings that if you do not say it how you need to...what would be the point? Great Hub:)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank you


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lalesu 6 years ago from south of the Mason-Dixon

Beautifully fascinating, AP.


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epigramman 6 years ago

you always write brave new words with precise poetic impact.

And you are one of the true visionaries on these hub pages...


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Ben Evans 6 years ago

Very interestingly angry. I enjoyed this one.

Cheers


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Good To Hear.


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goody7 6 years ago from over there under the sycamore tree

you sure can write good poems. When you get a chance you'll have to check my beer poem.


MrDSpade2 6 years ago

Awful Poet???????


MrDSpade2 6 years ago

Yeah i had to leave then come back to think what to say, mmmmm, that shit was nuttzzz, i enjoyed it alot, keep writing, let the creative tension, explode, hahaha...


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Will Do.


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DarkDisOrder 6 years ago from B.A.D. (Beyond All Dimensions)

Something said stop thru here, now i see, the emotional choas in this write lured me in, thanks for this, it inspired my soul of disarray... Well done...


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Most Obliged..


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Visual imagery was a hit , kinda creepy ,yet ,nice and dark ! your not an awlful poet , just twisted :)


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Awful Poet 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank you very much, For your input and read.


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Lisa Luv 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

Has some major rythm going on... You really let it flow.. You have great talent.. This reminds me of a rap beat.. Have you ever written any rap? I did once ---It is called You could much more be... I think you might relate to it.. I will look it up and send it out to hubbers and maybe it will catch your eye... Keep on writing ! YOU DO HAVE TALENT!!!!


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nenytridiana 4 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

That isn't like your hub name at all! beautiful Awful poet!


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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

I would have never expected so much attention on this piece, But we are on hub;s were things tend to go a bit backwards sideways and horizontal... I am eternally gratful to all of you have taken the time in commenting my work. Every last one of you have been such a benifit in bringing myself out of my own block of sorts in sharing such work. Ap~

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