Etches

Etches in the sky~

Naked barked trees~

Bare they be. ~


Stripped of all their leaves~

Nude exposed~

Engraved in the blue, blue height~

Only a sketch left for this pro.

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Unclothed~

For all to see~

Cuts into the soul~

Nothing left to impede.

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All the lushness gone~

No obstruction for the sun~

Only an etch in the sky~

Slowing Mother Nature down.

By

Lisa J. Warner

AKA

Lisa Luv

CopyRight11/10/2013@LisaLuvLLC


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States

I enjoyed the poetry and art work. Thanks so much for sharing.whonu


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Lisa Luv 3 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank you whonunuwho ....Have a wonderful day!


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word55 3 years ago from Chicago

That was wonderful Lisa Luv. Beautiful scenery too. Makes you look forward to winter coming where I am.


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kharismacey 3 years ago

Beautiful. Thank you.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Beautiful! thank you


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Lisa Luv 3 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

word55 ,kharismacey,Mhatter99 Thank you so much for stopping by...May you all have a wonderful day!


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

It is always a contrast to see the vibrant colors of fall give way to the naked branches of winter. Such true and descriptive imagery. Beautiful. V+!

Kim


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PDXKaraokeGuy 3 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Way to go Lisa. Nice work. Enjoyed this a lot!


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Lisa Luv 3 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank you very much ---both ocfireflies & PDXKaraokeGuy---it is such a blessing for me you both came to read... and it warms my heart your kind comments... Enjoy your day!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Wonderful Lisa; loved it and voted up.

Eddy.


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Phyllis Doyle 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

Lovely words and lovely images. I enjoyed reading this, Lisa.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Absolutely beautiful. Love the pics.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

This is a great way to portray fall. I can see the meaning visually as I read the poem and the photos are a great add to the words.


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Lisa Luv 3 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Eiddwen ,Phyllis Doyle,Gypsy Rose Lee, & teaches12345 so nice of you all to stop by! Thank you so much for your kind comments... May you all have a lovely Sunday! Have a blessed day!

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