Eternal Abyss

Darkness enfolds me in its arms
asphyxiating the life from this body
In a death grip, it dares not give
up its fragile hold
Eternal abyss swallows my soul
Tired of fighting, I give in to the chasm
peaceful and cold
sweet comforting darkness
beckoning slowly casting its spell
Obscurity surrounds me
drawing me close to its bosoms
Whispers, a lovers breath I cannot feel
sounds of sorrow, I no longer hear
I'm Alone in this eternal abyss
So far tapped, I don't believe I'll ever be found
Am I damned to die in this abode?
Have I sentenced myself to my own private hell?
Am I prisoner in my own self?
Rapt in pity I held the key that unlocks my cage
Now rusted from my tears
Condemn, remaining always locked away from the world
introvert and deserted discovery eludes me
Eternal abyss welcomes me

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Dirtdog 7 years ago from New Smyrna Beach / Edgewater , Florida

very nice

It is wonderful to run across feelings no matter how they are represented although happy seems stale as to your writing it has depth an feelings . It is very much appreciated Thank you for sharing it .

Cheers Dirtdog

maybe you'll enjoy mine here > As the link say's beyond the ledge

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Dirtdog 7 years ago from New Smyrna Beach / Edgewater , Florida

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Shalini Kagal 7 years ago from India

Wonderful poem - is the darkness and the eternal abyss a prison or a release? The poem deals with it so well!

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ralwus 7 years ago

It is a good poem and so heartfelt too. that can become a prison so don't remain, you have the key you know.

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XTASIS 7 years ago from The Beginning

I really liked it ! Darkenss that can almost be felt.

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ek ellis 7 years ago Author

darkness and the eternal abyss is a prison the person finally gives into after struggling for so long with their own personal demons, in the end succumbs to the peace it offers

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