Eternal Sand

 I wrote this one when I was 18. I share some poems from the past occasionally.

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Eternal Sand

The sand merges with the ocean
every second of every day,
A love they've built for centuries
a bond that's there to stay.

The waves crash against the sand
sweep its heart away,
And take it for a journey
as they dance, and sing, and play.

Whether they're smiling at the sunshine
or making love at night,
They always work in unity
to achieve their common plight.

So if you were my ocean
and I, your eternal sand,
I will stand by you forever
as we step forth hand in hand.

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Fay Paxton 5 years ago

Very nice poem. up/beautiful


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gis_r07 5 years ago from Boston, MA Author

Thanks Fay. Glad you enjoyed it.


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Vickie Bovender 5 years ago from Southeastern US

Very nice!


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gis_r07 5 years ago from Boston, MA Author

Thanks for stopping by Vickie. Glad you enjoyed it.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Beautiful words.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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gis_r07 5 years ago from Boston, MA Author

Thanks for stopping by and for your kind word Eiddwen- always appreciated.


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LVidoni5 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Mature words for 18, greeting card worthy(as a compliment).


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gis_r07 5 years ago from Boston, MA Author

Thanks for stopping by and leaving me comments LVidoni5. I am happy that you read and appreciated my work.

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