Even A Tear (tanka)

When even a tear

Born in sorrow’s endless night

Silent after all

Still springs sparkles of a light

What reflections do we see


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very profound and beautiful words (less is more sometimes).

Excellent, Mh!

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


cleaner3 3 years ago

very nice .. I like it !


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MargaritaEden 3 years ago from Oregon

Beautiful :) You sure know how to use words to express feelings!


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Awesome and profound.It says more than its words.Thanks so much for this poem.

Have a nice day.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I had to read this three times to get the meaning. Now I get it. Very thought provoking, Martin!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Beautiful words are reflected from midnight's tears.

You paint a profound picture, Martin. Well done!!


dreamseeker2 3 years ago

Short, but sweet. I liked it! Voted up for sure and awesome! : )


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh so beautiful !!!

Thanks for sharing.

Eddy.


Sueswan 3 years ago

Yes, what reflections do we see? Wonderful and profound.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Yes, indeed, what do we see? It can change, just like a mood.


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Cyndi10 3 years ago from Georgia

Sweet words, wonderful writing.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Deeply beautiful...


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girishpuri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Thought provoking, Martin, God bless.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Awesome, and so beautifully written.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

How carefully you choose just the right combination of words to create imagery that reaches into the soul.

Thank you for sharing this, Martin.

Voted Up++

Sending Angels to you today :) ps


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

mmmmmm...beautiful and deep...


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Very nice!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

OHHH martin so beautiful again a tear .. makes me cry

blessings

Debbie


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Jamie Brock 3 years ago from Texas

This reminds me that it's always the darkest before the dawn... this is something I need to hear today.. thank you :)

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