Ever Return (tanka)

Will ever return

Back to the source of its spring

Whispers in shadows

Treasures of another day

Where she will find me waiting


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Lovely work, Martin.


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passionate77 3 years ago

nice and lovely! too short but conveying the complete message, blessings mhatter99!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

mmmmm..i love when you get ro-mayan-tic! lol

(love the choker she's wearing tooooo....)

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Cyndi10 3 years ago from Georgia

So simply and beautifully written. Cyndi


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

A simple masterpiece.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I do so like the duality in meaning. That must be the extra bonus.

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