Evermore (tanka)

Lost in the evening

Soft melody in the air

Fragrant memories

Of flowers dancing in fields

Across the vast evermore


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dreamseeker2 3 years ago

So romantic, Mhatter99!! : ) Love it! I had to vote it up and beautiful!!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Martin, this paints a wonderful picture of contemplation and contentment.

Beautifully done.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Beautiful my friend.Voted up


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I can just imagine myself sitting quietly in the swing, under the stars and listening to all the sounds of the night.


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very awesome my friend !


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

I do admire people like yourself who can write exquisitely in different poetic genres...oh, and there's the flowers again, I love it!

Voted up and awesome.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Another beautiful tanka. Loved it and the picture is so serene...


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Fragrant memories are the most vivid... how beautiful!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. This was so lovely and the pic too. I pearled this.


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Guru-C 3 years ago

Exquisite words that open the heart.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

You are a master of words.


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W1totalk 3 years ago

First thing I thought, why are women so fragrant? Great tanka.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The scene is so picturesque.


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

Very romantic and I love the image used.

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