Every Time

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Every time

I allowed you

to hurt me

was a gift

of myself

to you

a chance

to take care

of my love.


Every time

you threw

my gifts away

as if they were

nothing

but old bags

of trash.


Every time

I asked you why

asked you if

you could be so kind

as not to leave

my love behind.


Every time

you smiled

and lied

put up a front

as if to say

why oh why

am I thinking the worst

of you.


Every time

I believed your words

you made me pay

with only regrets

to pass my time.


Now you are free

to never think about me

or wonder why I ask you why

need your time

or expect your best

as all my gifts have expired

and there is no more

every time.

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Careermommy 3 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

Wow, that was such a simple, yet powerful and heartfelt poem truthfornow. Great job.


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks for the encouragement careermommy.


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lupine 3 years ago from Southern California (USA)

You really followed through on your poem, liked the ending too. Awesome! Did you read my hub/poem? Love is gone, but not forever...


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

One can only take so much pain, until it is time to move on to greener pastures. So well done!


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adjoycepoet 3 years ago from New Jersey

Lovely poem. I like the show of strength at the end.


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks for reading and your comments.


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow what a poem.. I think i need to say that .. to a certain person..

love your poem.. many blessings

Sharing

Debbie


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

The ending is very profound and it holds the poem for beyond the poem itself. very nicely done. Loved it and shared across with votes all upway.


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Cyndi10 3 years ago from Georgia

This is an awesome poem. That's how to say "I'm done!" Good work.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Graceful yet powerful. Very nice.


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks everyone for reading my poem and sharing such kind comments of encouragement. You are all much appreciated.


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prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful poem. Thanks for writing and share with us. Voted up!

Prasetio


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Your words are very expressive on pain and living through it. Great job on portraying it in such a few words. Love your poetry style!


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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Beautiful poem and the end is powerful. Voted up.


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks everyone for such kind comments and encouragement.


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MrsBrownsParlour 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

I have known this kind of relationship so I wanted to clap when I reached the end! Well-done...I especially like the construction of just a couple words per line---it gives it impact.


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

What a heartfelt write!


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Great poem, we all burn out.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Awesome and such a lovely poem with meaningful words and


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Peggy W 3 years ago from Houston, Texas

You expressed living through a hurtful relationship but coming to a realization that you deserve better treatment than that very beautifully in a few words. Up and useful votes.


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks for the encouragement. You are all very much appreciated.


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lupine 3 years ago from Southern California (USA)

All this positive feedback should be encouraging...hope to read more like this.


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ahorseback 3 years ago

Oh man , as my heroes above have said already ! You write soo well !.....thanks for this .:-}


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Victoria Lynn 3 years ago from Arkansas, USA

"There is no more every time." I love that line! You expressed so well how I have felt before. Great poem. Many votes!


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Heartfelt, and so true. Thanks for sharing, and I share too!


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks midget38.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Top notch! Great flow !

This poem had it all. My heart ran the gammut of feelings as I read.You are very talented.Voted up


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks for the support and vote up James-wolve.


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Darrylmdavis 3 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

Sad but true...a sweet write :-)

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