Evil Potion; I'm One of Them


In a dark fogy wood, cricket sound…owls hoot…wolves howl and a strong wind blows whistling the darkly sky

“wheeeeeew” as the branch hitting one another, “click…click…click…”

Shadow of the branch waves back and fourth

Brings chills to my spine


And there I reach to the hilltop; I see the olden brick castle

Where the witches live and goblin hides

Demons whirling around the hill, ghost taken over the sky

Moonlight brighten up the sky leaving shadows of ghost wandering

“Booooooo…..” they cried leaving Goosebumps dance my skin


Witches chanting their evil potion

“Scales of dragon, tooth of wolves

Tongues of dogs and toes of frogs

Babies fingers and goat livers

Powerful evil and fangs of devil

Make the gruel thick and slab

Double,double toil and trouble,

Fire burn and cauldron bubble.”

“yeee heee heee heee heee” they cried

As the candle light glows with a bright smoky flash


My body was stone after what I saw

And a woman with dark long hair

Appeared beyond of me

Covering her face, floating toward me….I could not run nor could I hide…

She lift her head up with a sound of crack, evil dead eyes stare upon me

With magical power she lift me up off my feet and locked me by the throat

She throws me into the castle which broke the front door


“Human….” The witch says as if I was her dinner

The three witches surround me with their evil stares

Fears tempted me everywhere

They snatched me by the arm and say

“Boil her!” and throw me in their boiled potion


They scream with laughter while I’m suffering in their pot of hell

Which then I became part of them

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icciev 5 years ago from Kuwait

Amazing and well written, loved it. voted up


JadedLove 5 years ago

Not my kind of witch, but I must say that you captured much in your words. The evil, the death, the becoming of life within them. Beautiful.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hello iccieve and jadedlove, thanks! :)


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

BOO,Scary..You spun an exciting tale..Well done.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Ruby, thanks! :)


Derdriu 5 years ago

Chanroth: What a poignant, powerful, provocative mix of deep fears, inexorable meter and shocking tragedy! That is an absolutely overwhelming last liner!

Thank you, voted up, etc.,

Derdriu


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Derdriu, thank you! :)

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