Evil Twins

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I wonder if it is a sin

to have and love an evil twin...

if one is light and one is dark,

and co-habitate the self same ark.

I wonder if it violates

any terms of use, or irritates..

that two of us in body dwell...

with yet such different tales to tell.

I wonder if we're recognized...

or if our bond is realized...

and if the truth should come to light,

would we be banished in the night?

It is a risk that we must take

for the good of all at stake...

to write as two but dwell as one...

or sacrifice this double fun!


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bellawritter23 profile image

bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

lol, a hidden message I sniff!!

Great stuff No_Clue.

smiles :)

bella


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca

Very cool.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

That's pretty badass...

Very mischievous, well written.

Nice!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

bella, you little speed-reader, you! and so astute is your sense of smell...! Thank you kindly! That is a thrill from a little Poetic Goddess such as yourself!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

barbergirl, thank you very much...a fun little write!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

BenWritings, thank you, Kind Sir! Yes a bit mischieveous we are today! Thank you for your visit and most awesome comment!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Grins is all that is showing ;D


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Radioguy 5 years ago from Maine

"...duble fun" I like that!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Very clever my friend, two meanings of the same thing, twins or same side of the coin I think. Voted up


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Radioguy, thank you! a dangerous little ditty, this, but double fun, indeed!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

thebluestar...thank you, kindly! same side of the coin, perhaps...perhaps not...perhaps two sides of a single coin...hmmm gonna have to chew on that...smile! ~Peace~


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

There are three I's

The I you THINK you are

The I others THINK you are

And the I you REALLY are.

So it is not the the fact that you worry about having another side to yourself it is the fact that you can't see the third and most important aspect that saddens me.


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Like the double-mint twins? Or Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde? This one's mysterious. I like mysterious.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

hmmm...Mr. Turner, perhaps a touch of both! and mysterious it is, to even me! Thank you, Kind and noble Sir!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

we all have a good and a bad side. as also portrayed in my hub and the movie, The Black Swan, if youd like to check out my poem that would be great! :)


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Nikki, indeed we do and I shall go presently to the Black Swan!


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tumblintumblweed 5 years ago

Amazing! I can so relate to that! Is that a good thing???


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

hmmm...not sure!!! LOL attys!


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epigramman 5 years ago

.......well I know who your evil twin is and she's an absolute poetic goddess!!!!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

This is a concept that has followed me for a good part of my life, actually...I went to a Christmas party one year many years back, at my line leader's house. When he answered the door, he did not recognize me...and I told him I was his assembler's evil twin...lol...by the end of the evening I had convinced the entire group! I was probably the only one there sober which made it all the funnier for me!!! Being two in one is kinda fun and affords me freedom I would not afford one of us! LOL...I crack myself up with this little practice but don't keep secrets so well...as I am sure you can plainly see! Love to you, epi...you got more than you asked for here but...

Thank you!!!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

'I wonder if we're recognized...

or if our bond is realized...

and if the truth should come to light,

would we be banished in the night?'

Brilliant sense of fun, intrigue and mischief! I hope you are not banished 'cos this is too much fun.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Docmo, thank you, Kindly!


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BrightMeadow 5 years ago from a room of one's own

I don't usually like modern rhyme poetry, but this was very clever and very well done. Thumbs up!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, BrightMeadow,! I appreciate your read and comment!


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justom 5 years ago from 41042

I'll see you on the dark side of the moon :-P (I have no idea why I said the but I like this one:-D Peace!! Tom


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

justom, lol...dark side of the moon, huh? I really like that little phrase! Thanks for your awesome comments!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What a lovely poem! Split personality makes life pretty much fun =) There is no limit for splitting and cloning though =)

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