Excellent Evening

We must strive to overcome...
We must strive to overcome...


The worst of days, an interruption, at times seem to rule our lives, as corruption,

When the next day's light shines above the dimming clouds, our glad perception.

No matter the depressing acts, the harming of our mind's eye, of its deprivation,

There's always the brightest lights to lead our way, in reflection, as an inspiration.

  Soon to see our brightest inspiration...
Soon to see our brightest inspiration...


Truly, there are none so blind, as those who refuse to see, this life's true purity,

The excellence of a superb sunup, the quiet beauty in repose, grandest sanctity.

The time well spent at each days end, in watching a setting sun, to comprehend,

The magnificence of such inspiration, a benevolent god, words cannot transcend.



simple words cannot transcend...
simple words cannot transcend...


Through the storms of life, we all must plough, and to overcome it all, somehow,

Separating the good from the bad, leaving the worst behind, then to disavow.

Within our minds, we must each comprehend, for our memories, rewrite again,

Concentrating on the positive then, by our own experiences, us to recommend.

by our own past experiences to recommend...
by our own past experiences to recommend...


The healing powers of us all, so towers, high above us, yet within our reach,

A look within, a look outside, a congruent precept, worthy for all to beseech.

Life, is much a paradox, baffling mystery, an enigma, a dream, a conundrum,

Finding our way in this perplexing dream, to focus on reality, use our cerebrum.


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The majesty of it all...
The majesty of it all...

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Ericdierker 5 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

That is very good. I so much love this life.


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vink21778 5 months ago from India

Very well composed.Such beautiful words and poetry,Lots of love and gratitude.


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

Thank you for your nice comments my friend. whonu


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Perspycacious 5 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Pensive moments ponder our existence, then refreshed we rise and venture on.

Your poem says this quite well. Regards.


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend. Nice to hear from you. You are one of my favorites on these pages. What you have to say...other folks listen to and realize the depths of your thoughts. Thanks. whonu


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Michael-Milec 5 months ago

In midst of a storm and calm life is beautiful and compelling; we continue safely having the Prince of peace in our lives.


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

Yes my friend, he is always with us in our minds and hearts. The angels watch over us as well.Thank you for your nice reviews. whonu


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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Simply wonderful and the pictures stir the soul.


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend. whonu


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bravewarrior 4 months ago from Central Florida

Awesome reflection, whonu. Perfectly befitting of my rose-colored glasses.


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whonunuwho 4 months ago from United States Author

Thanks and always remember to keep a pair of extra clear ones handy as well. whonu

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