Exotic Beauty


Strike the chord

You lost me in between

Heaven and Hell

I miss you

My mind's stuck

Behind this veil

Stuck in this wishing well

Do you see my tears

You've left me with so much fear

Holding onto chains

Breathless repelled in mid air

Lost my flight

Where were you to save me

When I needed you most

The rose strung from up above

Beyond the mountains

In midst between clouds

Everything moves faster

Thrown into oblivion

You were nowhere to be seen

Exotic beauty lost in between



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mathira 4 years ago from chennai

Good one carolinemd21.The picture and the poem sync together.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California.

Hi Caroline, Good depth and feeling. Greg


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Now I am wondering where on this earth you find these gorgeous pics , I see Ronenkreutz , but , he or she don't make it easier for you to then jump all over with effortless ease, of poetic justice . As I remember all the others with beautiful pics. Times and times again. Now I insist to know more.

It's a beautiful poem, with the mystery in tact.

Bless.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wonderful feeling and just beautiful poem..love your picture...

I voted up and beautiful

Have a wonderful Christmas

Debbie


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

This is one of those poems that you must read with your heart, and not with your eyes. Beautifully done caroline.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Mathira thank you! Glad you stopped by!

@ Gregas Thanks for the support and reading.

@ Sky Thank you so much for your kind words. I find the pix all over! If you just look you'll find them. Thanks again for reading my friend!

@ Deborah thank you so much for your kind words and support!

@ Senoritaa thank you for your sincere comment! Always good to see you.


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Jspot 4 years ago from Flames of water and love

Absolutely beautiful. Something beyond exotic in my eyes. Voted way up and very beautiful


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Jspot. I'm glad you liked it. The pic kind of looks like the girl in the photos you use. Gorgeous photos by the way.


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Simplicity4All 4 years ago from Rhode Island, USA

This is beautiful I love the ending! :D


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Simplicity. I'm glad you liked it.

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