Poem: Eyes wide shutt!

Unchained Bulls, running wild and free,

Street pastures dimmed by implosion schemes

A Nation on the brink ?

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Frank you are a poet will great drama , I am actually quite surprised , you haven't tried a dramatic Haiku as yet. But then again understanding steps in and asks me, I am? If so why?

Thanks brethren .

Bless


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

Like Wall Street getting ready to explode I love the dramatics in so few words :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you Dark and lovely love the lion.Hope it is.lol

Thanks for you kind help on this one , I actually love the style , but I keep feeling that there is more I can put. Guess it's a hard habit to break.

I 'll stop by , feel I 'll learn something as I am doing now..

Thanks for reading and the help comment.

Bless.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Of course "AE" , how can some have so much almost all, while other humans have none?

But I do believe that every form of life have it's own way of fixing itself and we are the most intelligent!

Am hoping in every regard!

Thanks "AE"

Bless.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork

that all it takes.. one verse and it tell a story


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

If you're referring to the political mess we have in this nation, I agree. The rich get richer and the poor gets poorer. We said, " Yes we can in 08 and we will say it again......Keep writing..

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