FLAsh


You’re ticking all round my clock

I’m in circles of your love

I feel you in

Baby the distance is killing me


And I suffocate

in the air that I breathe

You’re in every particle of mist

Try to detach myself

but you bring me back to life

Resuscitate me with your kiss


I’m stupid

I know you hate me

I’m too dense

I know you love me


You’re a vapor I wanna sigh

My cigar when I chill numb

I paint you in

But sometimes I forget your smile


And I cry a hundred

when I can’t touch your hand

You’re in every song and sound

Try not to miss yourself

But you’re underneath my skin

My spine has memorized you babe


I’m stupid

I know you hate me

I’m too dense

I know you love me


I get closer when I run away

I inhale you when I moan

My heart’s screaming when I don’t speak

I’m scared I couldn’t let you go


I don’t just love you

Too deep now

to never get drowned…


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Wow. Sometimes you manage to pull something even MORE special out of the hat than ususal.... Thank you for that wonderful poem. Take care. x


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

AHhh,the confusion of love is a stupifying phenomena,lol,you put that to text beautifuly,Blaise.;)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Wow - I totally loved this.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Wow,so different,yet very intriguing.I liked it.


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katrinasui 5 years ago

Wow! Its not only different but interesting. I liked it.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh to be close yet so far, to be the one but not yet "taken", and to know and yet be unsure. That is torture, and the best thing to do is not fall off that tightrope, Fehl. You really love this person, and the indecision is tough. Your poetry is always frank and honest. You never cease to amaze me with your brilliant way of putting things, cos no matter how confused you are, it somehow makes sense reading it. Deep is the word here - you are in so deep. Great poetry. :) XO


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you for always reading my works Dim :) You're just so lovely and amazing. XX

Hi Prof A! I admire your special words :) Thanks a lot! XX

Acaetna, always exploring and Katrinasui thank you guys!

Hello Cathy! My lyrics just like any could convey so much meanings and it's so interesting to hear your views and interpretations.. Yea I love this person and I was going through a lot when I wrote this. But it wasn't torture at all. I was profoundly happy. And sometimes being profoundly happy is scary. Oh I'm weird am I? Well I don't care really. It's me. And it's my song and I'm in love.

and yeah I'm in deep :) XO


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Aw, Fehl, this is a great poem, you write so fluidly as always. I am intrigued by how being happy is scary. Yes, sometimes we can be afraid it might shatter or be more fragile than we think - but I believe we feel the fear and love anyway. We should be never afraid to love or open our hearts. I love the honesty here too. That is your trademark, Fehl. Great writing as always. Cheers! have a great day! :) XO


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AmyTaylor 5 years ago

so different but I love this. I like when I can relate to writing and I definitly relate to this. Something so far yet so out of reach....sigh....your great


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lionel1 5 years ago

Excellent, respect is due. I really enjoyed that, thank.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Cassy! Lovely hat :) Very well said moi friend. I agree. Trademark huh LOL Thanks a lot! Cheers and happy holidays!

Amy Taylor hi! Thank you. Looking forward to read your hubs.

Hi Lionel! Oh thanks for the great words :)


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful and I love this very much. You made my day so colorful with this poem. Thanks for share with us. I give my vote to you. Cheers.......

Blessing and hugs,


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Beautiful love here Blaise! God bless you dear Blaise! Be safe and warm!


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CiscoPixie 5 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

F(ehl)L(oves)Ash.. :)

We're the only two people that understood that from the beginning.. I love you too baby :) x


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

the title says it all :)

xo


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

damn this is awesome

thanks for following me and commenting :]

this poem/song creates an odd feeling , not really sure what, but it's powerful

thanks


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Ben. Perhaps it would be more powerful if it was put into real music/song :)


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

You are such a soulful seeker I smile quietly at your 'in public' search.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

Really Amazing. I loved every bit. Lord knows I've felt that way many times.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

@Enigmatic - Thank you. Always happy to see you and your meaningful comments. :)

@Nikki - Hopes what you felt was awesomely good LOL Thank you Nikki :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What an amazing imagery, wow, takes my breath away! Fehl, it's a wonderful raw heartfelt poem!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh one of those moments.. I'm glad this took your breath away. I'm so happy today reading your beautiful comments. They inspire me to write more :)


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A beautifully written poem your true words show great meaning.


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks DDE :)


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

Amazing words. I love the beat of your poem.


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you for reading my hubs today. God bless you!

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