First some fresh boy~

Round town~

On the country roads.


Second kissed by you~

Giddy me~

In spin the bottle~

A crush if you please.


Third a friend~

I fixed with dates~

All the time wishing~

It was me~

“Gosh your call was late”.


Forth your manhood~

My body pinned~

Down straight~

Took both our~

Breaths surprisingly away!



Fifth the trip~

Far up the path~

Camped by the lake~

I thought~

“Alone at last”!


Sixth would be~

Our first knowing grasp~

Arms embraced~

Virginity given~

Chaste now~

Eons past…


Seventh a two year~

Passionate romance~

Exciting, frisky, frolicking~

We went on~

In our clasp…


Eighth the flight~

Which took you~

Abrupt, confused, depressed~

Away from me~

“I could never believe it was true”~

“ I could not believe this could be?”


Ninth the endless pining~

I mourned~

I telepathically sent~

Desperate, yearning, loathing of thee~

It could do no harm~

I was engrossed in thee.


Tenth the twenty year~

Wait again~

For the purest of love~

A reunion~

Once again of~

Combining our hearts.


Eleven the visits~

Like the bond~

With a comfortable~

Formidable shoe~

Nothing else to do~

But grab time with you.


Twelfth the days~

Drudged on~

Myself solace, lost~

Missing you.



Thirteen your question~

Finally came~

My answer dreaded~

As closure inevitably~

 To blame.


Fourteen my answer~

Of no practical space~

Said with no good words~

No comforting embrace.


Fifteen your silence~

Cold, cruel, hurt~

Yet warranted~

But you came~

Too late…


Sixteen the peace~

I prayed we~

Both were in~

A farce to us~

Of our chagrin.


Seventeen my love~

I know your trial~

Of fate~

Yet best you live~

In your proper place.


Eighteen my want~

The sweetest still part~

Of my heart tale told~

I yearn for you~

To eventually know.


Nineteen I was~

And you are~

Our first love~

Still forever more…



“Lisa J. Warner”


“Lisa Luv”






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qlcoach 7 years ago from Cave Junction, Oregon

Beautiful and touching Lisa. Wishing you a wonderful Thanksgiving. And by the way, how about we interview each other on Twitter? For more details just go here: Namaste, your friend, Gary.

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Lisa Luv 7 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank You Gary --sounds good --hopefully you will remind me again after the holiday --a happy one to you also!

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itakins 7 years ago from Irl

Very impressive poem-you have a gift,-I love the pics too.

Happy Thanksgiving.

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Lisa Luv 7 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author


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poetlorraine 7 years ago

enjoyed that it was lovely thanks a lot for writing

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Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Very impressive composition, loved the free flow of sentiments in short and swift junctures...

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Lisa Luv 7 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank You---I read it just now and enjoied it more myself-it was a complicated capture to write....

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