Faith: Testing a Hypothesis

Not a vague intuition...

a shot in the pitch black...

not a thing without foundation...

anchor-less drift into void...

not that void isn't a hazard...

not that black isn't seen...

but principal and method draws a gap.


It all must start at the record...

a document often flawed...

yet as for the method it makes no difference...

What's right or wrong gets resolved...

With in the record are laws...

Follow one and see...

do it with the intent the Great I Am meant...

It will prove to be fruitful or not...

Then from that fruit the confidence to take another step into the dark...

Find another principal and try it...

every step is a must...

The record will say how it is done...

each step of the way...

Follow the path of the Son...


The ones important, He repeated...

on earth he took every one...

study his day...

the culture, the way...

until you understand what was done...

then take up your cross and follow...

eternity waits up ahead...

I promise not sunshine...

pleasure or praise...

the road may end when your dead...

yet up at the end...

we all shall be friends...

brothers divine and unshackled...

Life will seem as if t'were a dream...

you will have to trust...

to see round the bend.


So pick up the book and start reading...

the earlier the book the better the read...

seek out the servants of heaven above...

to perfection...

its more then a dream.

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twolittlehands 6 years ago from Utah

Good advice. I accept the challenge. See you at the Top! (I hope)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

Simply brilliant, great advice.


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mylife=adventure 6 years ago from Wisconsin

Good writing i dont completly agree with the message but its greatly written thanks for sharing it gave me a reason to sit down and think.


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Jaggedfrost 6 years ago Author

Twolittlehands, I am glad you enjoyed and I have more then hope.

acaetnna or shall I call you ann? I am glad you enjoyed, you will have to tell me how the advice pans out.

Mylife, Its it marvelous that we don't have to agree. You have shown respect and I appreciate the chance to help you think about things. I wonder if the difference is in understanding or in not. I guess time will tell that.


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DavePrice 6 years ago from Sugar Grove, Ill

This is when your writing thrills me the most, when I have to stop and start over more than once to make sure I see everything you are saying. This time I'm still at it, because there is so much more than can be absorbed at first glance. Beautiful, inspirational and as deep as the seas.


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Jaggedfrost 6 years ago Author

lol Keep reading. It should be here for a while. If it helps you come to your own conclusion and advance certain though then I did my job.

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