Fallen Angel


On page five, she’s on

On the cover

Back and forth

In between words…

My head was spinning

I’ve been saying her name..


Rolled up my sleeves

I’m in love with you

I told her


The angel smiled and kissed me

It was wrong

But felt a million right


Night sky stars

filled our blanket of kisses

I knew heaven will take her…


I love you

to the moon and back

She told me



In an instant she’s gone

Suddenly I’m back to

where I started…


Chasing fireflies at 9 am

On a corner

she stood

In between hi and hello

I already gave all

my secrets away


All locked up

I’m fallin’ again

either I fall…


The angel embraced me

We gulped the night

The sweetest kind of wrong


Cupid aligned the stars

Heaven won’t be heaven

without her by my side


I love you, Fehl

Says the soft voice

in the airwaves…


Suddenly I’m closer to

where I started…







I'm chasing after you...


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Copyright © 2011 by Fehl Dungo All Rights Reserved

Bold texts taken from my fave, Hanging by a Moment (by Lifehouse)

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Two Poles 5 years ago from Morgantown, West Virginia

Very beautiful


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

A million right indeed....

I so enjoyed this.. had to read it several times..

I love writing about love Blaise', and you my dear friend are helping to show me the way...

No wonder you're loved so much...I feel myself sliding as well...hah.....you're amazing..!!!


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thirtyone 5 years ago from Sao Paulo - Brazil

Great poem!


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Ok Fehl:

All locked up

I’m fallin’ again

either I fall…

I'm going to get my keys and open this gate,but the next time I see you on the cloud way speeding with your hyper-wings I'm gonna lock you up in this feathered cell writing poems for Guardian Angel Mentalist acer until you fill another book...now get going.;)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Great verses and word usage!!

bella


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

You're an Angel, and your words are beautiful.

Smiles


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

awww this is so beautiful, it paints a lovely picture, a midsummer nights dream, breaking into dawn, chasing fireflies and halos.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Fehl, I love this new hub. Magical and mystical and so amazing as always. Angels have such an effect on us. We can become so attracted to Angels... and we love them so much. I loved these lines "The sweetest kind of wrong..." and this:

"Cupid aligned the stars

Heaven won’t be heaven

without her by my side..."

So beautiful. I am so loving your writing these days. :) I think I figured out the page 5 thing too. LOL. Mwah. I love romantic poetry.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Two Poles! God you’re awesome :)

Hello bbRed! Can I call you bbRed? lol Glad you loved this one. Thank you. I love writing bout love, too. It’s the main spice in our writings. Sliding..um take care of the Ferrari please hehe

Thirtyone, thanks man!

Hi Prof A! lol ok my Guardian, I’m gonna think bout the next book..I wonder, are you published? Thank you so much. You always impress me. XO

Wow, I’m so happy to see you here Bella. You’re amazing. Thank you so much. :)

Hi, Ruby! Thank you for the beautiful words. Your comments are always inspiring. :)

Hi, Nikki! Aw that’s magical..midsummer nights dream, breaking into dawn, chasing fireflies and halos, wow! Your mood is set..Get your pen and write bout that beautiful imagery :) You’re damn creative! Thanks so much, my friend. Always happy to see you around. XO

Hi Cathy! *smiles at you* So glad you loved this. I love your comment here..You always get me, babe. Hmmm what about the page 5 thing? Not sure if I’m thinking what you’re thinking.. :D Email me. Mwah.


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

bbred's ferrari turns shades of black, "to the moon and back"....sliding deeper...angel's draw knack...love as everything...dreamers turned back...held in a vision so grand where...

....

"The angel embraced me...We gulped the night...The sweetest kind of wrong"....

...

"Suddenly I’m closer to....where I started…"

Your words guide bbred's flight through love and it fits like a glove...


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lionel1 5 years ago

Your poems are so deep and so wonderful, I love your poems. Thank you for another amazing post.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

hey hey bbRed! I love the black Ferrari than the red. They say red cars are prone to accidents. But whatever. lol Pretty imagery..black Ferrari zoooming to the moon and back..waking up sexy angels.. O, there I saw you with one my friend. lol

You're closer to where you started? Mmmm? lol

Glad that my words guide you like a GPS hehe

Cheers! Happy to see you, bb! Have you done the medieval hub?

Hello Lionel! I appreciate your usual visits. Thanks so much for always reading. I'm so happy you love my poems. I'm back writing again.. Thanks! you're awesome! XO


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

on it as we speak...love this stuff ... wAy cool!!!

only blaise' gps can guide my black ferrari from the moon in medieval times..


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Yay! I already rated your medieval hub awesome and beautiful hehe

Wow, I'm honored. :) Blaise GPS can play music, too. lol Song above now playing..


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

blaise... done it again... shame on you for reaching our souls...and hearts.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

thought you forgot bout me...

ok, shame on me...lol

so happy to see you whenever I'm back XO


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

been keepin a low profile ;) But can't help but comment when I am around.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Since you're around now, can I request some poetry pleaze? :)


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is a standout hub and what a lovely warmth that bursts out from it. Your love Poetry is always beautiful and so impressive, and told with your wonderful soft lilting and easy-flowing style that I love so much. Wow! Feh, you are just more and more amazing to me these days! Honestly! You're the Greatest! :) XOXO


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

Left a little something by way of poetry out on my front step...if ya pass by...take a lookie-loo.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

*blushes* Hello Hermes..Peach muffin! Thank you. I'm so happy you loved this one. You've been so amazing since the beginning! Mwah! Me the greatest? Thanks. I'm not. :)

Hi Enigmatic! Oh wow I'm gonna go take a look :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe. "Hermes"? LOL. That is so cool, Fehl. You are typical...deflect the attention away from yourself. LOL. Fehl, you are very awesome and amazing. Mwah.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hermes..the messenger of the gods.. ^,^


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Yes, did someone mention Hermes? I got a message... LOL! Okay it was gmail, I'm following the hub! Heh! Peach Muffin! I love this! I wish Cathy would call me that! ROFL! Love that! ^,^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

She's my blueberry..you're my peach.. :) Well since you're like Peachy (from moi Stargazer) *winks*


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean

Blaise I loved the way you played with numbers in this. And this stanza rocked:

"Chasing fireflies at 9 am

On a corner

she stood

In between hi and hello

I already gave all

my secrets away"


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Aw thanks a lot Randy :) You always rock! Mwah!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Muffins, peaches...pancakes...I'm hungry...let's eat in Starbucks. ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Last Harry Potter tonight. Let's rock the movie house hun mMmm.. ^,^


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Harry Potter last night. I haven't seen it - we're seeing this weekend. I'd love rocking the movie house...Heh. ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I loved the Deathly Hallows Part 2. It's loveful and there were kisses..I didn't need Minka (my owl) I needed an elf to bring my baby there so I could chase my own horcruxes...^_^ Oh gosh, I missed you!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow, we are going this evening to see Harry, Ron and Hermione. This is my movie of the year for me. I am such a huge fan. I am going to re-read the books all over again. Oh I need an owl and a name for him or her. Heh. (Wishes I could use the fireplace flu system for instant travel local cinema, you and I could watch together. I could bring the popped popcorn and drinks...and muffins. LOL.)

I miss you too baby. Mwah. ^_^


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

SHHHHHH, some of us have to wait til Tuesday to see it.... no spoilers... ;)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Likewise. Oh yeah would be cool to disappear in the fireplace and be in London in a sec. My crazy horcruxes I'm gonna tell you in the email.. Mwah! (Minka says hi to you and Curly)

Hi EM! haha You're gonna love it. I'm gonna shut up now lol :)


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Karen Russell 5 years ago

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING IT WITH OUR GROUP, HOTEP>PEACE!


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Harry Potter was great, Fehl! Sad that there'll be no more after this. We are going to re-watch all the films all over again. Cathy's popping the popcorn! LOL!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi KR! Thank you. What's happening with FB's poet society? Gonna be changed to a new group?

Hi Peach Muffin! Yup, it's sad. I dont wanna think bout it. Oh I wish I was watching with you guys.. :c Cathy popping the popcorn yeah? LOL It's gonna be a movie er..marathon. :) Save the couch for me pleaze.. ^,^


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Aw cheer up, J.K. Rowling will be adding some things to the Pottermore website. Who knows what she will do next? It's rumored to be a possible Detective story of some kind...!

Yup, we got the popcorn and drinks! Ya got some Pizza too? Have a seat in the middle! Heh! Movie marathon...h'mm...yes....that too! ^,^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Yup Pottermore is a brilliant idea :) Sounds like a game and a website of all Harry Potter stuff..

Yup, I've got some hot pizza :) (Fehl hops in the middle..arm on Cathy, the other on Cassy..) So, are we gonna start the Sorcerer's stone or jump to the Hallows? ^,^


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl, we will start and just get stuck in. This is awesome. Heh. ^,^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Now I'm seeing things in 3D... ^,^

This is awesome! Where's is Curly? LOL


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Curly is right here. Can't wait to read the interview, Fehl! ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Yay, we're complete now. :)


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

All through the years the heart beats and pumps blood and then one fine day it discovers it has more purpose than just pumping blood.

It brings you close to your life source and helps you on the journey to find your soul mate.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh I almost forgot it pumps blood coz when I met my soul mate, it's been pumping honey... :)

Thanks for reading. Your works are awesome.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Beautifully crafted , thanks for sharing , voted up


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks a lot Jami :)


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Awful Poet 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

Fantástico~


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks Awful P :)


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kenneth avery 5 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

blaise . . .AM--AZ-ING HUB! Caught my heart and kept it. LOVED is not adequate to describe how I really feel right now about this....so please accept, GREAT, DEEP, MOVING, TOUCHING only a few adjectives to describe your talent. Peace and I will look for you later on hubs.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow thanks so much Kenneth :) So happy my hub is so loved :) Thank you. xx


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Oh wow, great work - I loved it!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Always happy to see you Acaetnna. Your poems are so romantic :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

You write so well. You seem to put your whole being into your poetry.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Yup I seem to be putting too much of what's in me maybe that's why it turns up so well :) Thank you lovely Dim xx


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Enjoyed the poem, it's Awesome. Keep it up.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much for the awesome wishes. :)


Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

That was one of the best poems I have ever read! Your storytelling skills are remarkable!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

OMG you got hugs for saying that :) Thank you Phoebe. Hope you read my other stuffs. See you around


Marina Lester 5 years ago

"Gulped the night and it was the sweetest kind of wrong" WoW! That line define a lot of this piece for me, put every other line together beautifully. Like a kiss in darkness this poem finds its reader... raw and perfect, the sweetest kind of wrong...


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

omigosh like a kiss in the darkness..that's so sexy! Raw and perfect, that is you, too Marina :)thank you so much.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

Gorgeous poem very unique style :) Love your writing. It kind of has a haunting beauty to it.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you for the gorgeous comments Caroline :) Haunting is a very nice word


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Freya Cesare 4 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Your choice of words always so flawless. Hard to not admire your ability in creating tense inside your sweet love scene. Bravo, Blaise!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Aww thank you Freya. I'm so happy to receive compliments especially from a great poet like you :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What a unique style, keeps me on the sensual edge till the last line, wow, beautiful!

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