Fallen Love

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Fallen Love

By Tony DeLorger © 2012



Melting moments, tears released,

hearts bruised and raw from truth appeased,

self-inflicted, deluded dreams,

expectations dispelled in reams.



Love's sweet path becomes of stone,

jagged edges and falling prone,

sour thoughts and deep regrets,

vet our swollen egos met.



Towers tall of future forged,

now topples, broken fragments small,

shattered bliss and love remiss,

now burns the soul in torments kiss.



And blindness made from false hope's cause,

now tears apart and closes doors,

isolating a heart once free,

and in darkness rests our will to see.



Hurt and pain now wields its sword,

carving flesh in mind accord,

while loss now fills an empty space,

and darkness closes in cold embrace.



When love falls down and life is dry,

and angels mourn their tears to cry,

and all of life is hurting true,

when love is lost a soul reviews.



Of passing love a heart must know,

that love at end is worth the throws,

if only for a moment passed,

sweet love's a light for soul repast.



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Tony DeLorger 3 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Glad you related blaise25. Thanks for dropping by.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

Truly everything is dark without love. This flowed fallen love as though the screen is crying. Very effective.


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Tony DeLorger 4 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks Aubrey, much appreciated.


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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

Good job, Tony!!


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Tony DeLorger 4 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Glad you liked it jbrock2041, and thanks for taking the time to comment.


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Tony DeLorger 4 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks a lot Michele, glad you liked it.


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Tony DeLorger 4 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks Emer420, I'm glad you appreciated it. Thanks for dropping by.


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jbrock2041 4 years ago from Park City, UT

Very nice. Your thoughts are well written and the flow is consistent throughout it. I felt the words as I read them.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Very lovely and emotional, feelings of the heart shared with us.

Voted up.


Emer420 4 years ago

Very beautiful! It was very well written and flowed so smoothly. I loved this. Very good job. Voted up! :)


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Tony DeLorger 4 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Much appreciated LaThing. Glad you connected.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

This is so touching, you can feel so much emotion here! "of passing love a heart must know.....", Beautiful....

Voting up and everything......

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