Falling (poem)

Heartbreak

Stay this moment

Of all those once where yesterdays turned black

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Teardrops

Drawn these wishes

Of fantasies whose ever never were

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Sorrow

Purge this shadow

Of echoes from another part of me

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How did we get here

What can recall

Seems mindless confusion

Has wiped out all trace

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A blame you for this

Others for that

But now these brief riches

Mean nothing at all

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Reason unravels

Love’s feelings flip

In bottomless hollow

A soul seeks a bend

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Escape

Cries some darkness

Outstretching a sole but promiseless hand

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Maybe

Comes an answer

From a voice I hadn’t heard for a while

Music only

Comments 11 comments

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Brandon Martin 3 years ago from Colorado, USA

:.) Wow. A lot of meaning to this. Beautiful and sad.


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

You always write so deep and passionately; always leave me to ponder and always amazed.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Great words and so well thought of with such emotions


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

A very emotionally charged poem. Awesome! (Voted Up) -Rose


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very heartrending poem. Loss of love is so very painful. We must have been on the same thought patterns this day in our writings. Powerful music video too.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Evocative on so many levels. Voted UP!

Best Always,

Kim


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Mysterious and deep...


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

That was a very deep poem!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Imagine that...no, I guess he can't. Sometimes it just takes that second thoiught on what might be.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Love the mystery.


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

I like the way it kind of changes mood slightly at the end.

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