Feathers: A Poem


Falling with grace,

Floating or flying?

As gravity whispers,

"Come closer."

Is this the beginning of everything?

Freedom begins with a leap of faith,

Boldly dancing into forever,

Letting go of all that tethers,

To be softly guided by the sky's fervent flutters.


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2 years ago

Some great thoughts there! :)

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Ebower 2 years ago from Georgia Author

f: Thank you!

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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Love this poem ebower. Well done.

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btrbell 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful! Thank you!

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Ebower 2 years ago from Georgia Author

Jodah: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

btrbell: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it was great. :)

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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A wonderful way to think of a poem.

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vocalcoach 2 years ago from Nashville Tn.

A powerful message given with gentle, beautiful words. Thank you. Sharing.

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Ebower 2 years ago from Georgia Author

DDE: Thank you very much!

vocalcoach: Thanks for reading and sharing!

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Charu Bhatnagar 2 years ago from India

It is beautiful, something a perfect combination of faith in divine, beauty of a feather, everything. Terrific. :-) I have been less active since past many months but I shall try to change that now. Missed out on so much good work. :-)

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