Feeling You, like a dense cloud.

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Right from that moment,

when I saw you,

I felt, this world,

like a prickly sunlight,

and you, the sweet beauty,

like a dense cloud.

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At this very moment,

my heart is about to,

express, it's keen desire,

now, once again,

I told it, not to do so.

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At the very painful,

and unwanted moment,

just after your departure,

I will imagine all that,

to which I have gained,

and whatever, I have lost.

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To which, I can't whisper,

in a rhythmic way,

why the time has sung,

that ugly and cruel song ?

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AUPADHYAY 2 years ago from INDIA, UTTAR PRADESH STATE, KANPUR CITY Author

Thanks jhamann and Eiddwen, for your valuable comments. Now a days, I am out of touch on HP due to over workload. Even, I am unable to move on HP once in a week, hardly. Sorry for late response. But the response will be given, it is certain.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A clever poem with some beautiful images to add that perfect final touch.

Eddy.


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

You crafted the turn emotions with great skill, thank you for sharing. Jamie

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