Fell Upon Your Praise


Your kissed caress my soul

Passion whisper full of romance

Glitter the heart of mine; I fell in love

But I wonder if solace hides in a distant


Years we tied a knot

My heart was full of flame

That shine so bright full of delight

Yet today, my passion is burned with misery and disdain


Crimson tears conquer the eyes of me in great pain

Feeling crushed and wrapped inside

By false word, fake love, hidden secret

Lies, I fell by your praise


Now alone I sit and listen

To the whisper of emptiness

Singing to me

Feeling burden by the brutality and filth of your hand on me

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Trishita Banerjee 4 years ago from Kolkata,India

so expressive!!


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi Chanroth.

I only hope that this hub is a fantasy and not an experience of yours, other wise a good hub.

Take care.

LOL Ghaelach


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi trishita and Ghaelach, thank you! @Ghaelach, its all fantasy! :) Thank you

Chanroth


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Very expressively put! Good inspiration!


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi Chanroth.

I'm pleased it is just fantasy, but that sort of thing does happen. Knowing it is just your fantasy i can have a leisurely day with my hubs.

Take care Chanroth.

LOL Ghaelach


Derdriu 4 years ago

Chanroth, What a raw, searing indictment of betrayal! The contrast between beautiful beginnings and evil endings is graphic, as is all the teeming images in between.

Thank you for sharing, etc.,

Derdriu


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Gypsy, Ghaelach, and Derdriu, thank you! @Ghaelach, you are right, that sort of thing sure does happen to some people. I just hope and pray that it would not be me or you or any of my friends. Lots of warm hugs!

Chanroth


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lyns 4 years ago from USA

So much pain from a love affair gone wrong, very well piece put together and felt, thanks for sharing. I like your style of writings they all bring light to the words. Happy Holidays. lyns


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Lyn, thank you! Happy holiday to you too! Best wishes and warm hugs! :)


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

ncie work, Chanroth. I really liked this line: "Glitter the heart of mine; I fell in love"


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi PDX, thank you! ^_^


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

you're welcome, Chanroth!

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