Where Iife stands! and what is my stance?

Hope

Hope
Hope

Blind Folded

Where Life stands! and what is my stance?

Screams inside me? exposed me at last

I thought I was alive ,as my heart beats are live

Now my heart, beats me hard by making me realize

That heart is not life even still alive,

Where Life stands! and what is my stance?

I thought of happiness is to answering desires,

One after the other, like models who put the ramp on fire,

Lips making a curve angle, me waiting for an angel!

Loops of my desires ,creates so much pressure

I can‘t feel pleasure, I can’t feel pleasure

Where Life stands and what is my stance !

I thought of a beauty, as harmony of appearance

Too many of affairs ever ready to appear!

Now I want to disappear, as I lost my flair!

What beauty really is ? I don’t want to think of it !

Where Life stands! and what is my stance?

Am I drawing conclusion ,or this is a illusion

I wanna know the reality,without feeling anxiety !

Oh God Oh God give me a chance ,,,

And Clear me, my stance….

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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Very powerful, expressive writing, welcome to Hub Pages, best wishes MM


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shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks MM

This is my first writing .Feedback about this will really help me to continue writing or not.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A very deep write. I tended to read ths in hip hop style.

Welcome to the Hub


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shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Rosemay

Looking forward for an audio file :)


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vianasya 5 years ago from Indonesia

Great poetry you have here, shobish! I like the picture and mostly your writing. Good work. Looking forward to see more from you :)


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shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

Hello Shobis! First of all a Grand Welcome to the Hub world. Let me tell you that your Poem has very Deep meaning. Amazing. You should keep writing & don't be stop here. My best wishes are with you.:)

voted up, Awesome, Interesting, Beautiful.

With lots of Respect

from SHANAYA:)


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shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Shanaya/Vianasya

This really mean a lot to me .


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Deeply anguished; it expresses the thoughts in a clear fluidity. Well done.

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