Fields Of Time (tanka)

In the fields of time

Some people enjoy their view

Lavishing in life

Wondering what waits ahead

While others weep their goodbyes

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Faith Reaper 17 months ago from southern USA

Great observation here about life ... I love your tankas.

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Vellur 17 months ago from Dubai

Great tanka,cycle of life.

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bravewarrior 17 months ago from Central Florida

It's all in perspective. We can look forward to the future or mourn the past. Great message, Martin!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 17 months ago from Riga, Latvia


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