I am on the ground,

the room is spinning.

I want to give up

(it would be easy).

(I am good at it) .

I have been thrown an opponent.

One to big for me .

I am scared,

to scared to get up.

I am hurt and beat up.

I am bruised and broken.

My eyes close,

I see you .

You kiss me and say,

"don't let go"

I pick myself up .

I am stumbling.

You are watching me and

I wont let you down.

I am standing

I pick my fist up.

Watching the blood fall,

I deliver it,

I delivered a knock-out.

I have won,

because of you .

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JadedLove 5 years ago

Well done. A fighter inside of a lover waiting for all other paths to fade before stepping up and pushing on. Up and awesome. Keep it up.

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Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

Hi Silent Sinner, you are indeed a fighter and extraordinary brave person. I feel the determination in your poem - well done! Voting up and awesome as well.

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Silent Sinner 5 years ago Author

Thank you Jadedlove and Cloverleaf. I love to love but fighting is important.

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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork

you said that fighting is important.... until a person loses,

then reality step in

great hub.

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Silent Sinner 5 years ago Author

Darknlovely when reality steps in is when we realy learn to fight, maybe not physicaly but we do fight.

One of my favorite sayings is, "If you don't fight for something, you will fall for anything".

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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

Wow-what a powerful message. Well done.

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Vicki99 5 years ago from Meridian Idaho

Great job! And you are right, fighting is important. Never give up. Voted up.

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the clean life 5 years ago from New Jersey Shore

One more awesome hub. Well done and so true. Never Ever give up. Voted Up and awesome!

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Silent Sinner 5 years ago Author

Thank you all for your support. Standing up when all you want to do is fall a very important trait to have. It's also important to know that staying strong is always a better choice. :)

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mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

i can see the love inside the fight. keep it up.

motti and bander

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