Fight to be Free

But I keep getting blocked; there are always rocks in my way.
But I keep getting blocked; there are always rocks in my way. | Source

I cleared my head

And let my body be

I screamed to the world

What do you expect out of me?

*

You've handed me lemons

And I've tried to make lemonade

But yet I keep getting blocked

And my goals are starting to fade

*

I'm lost in the darkness

I don't know which way to turn

I've done what has been asked

Can't you see I am trying to learn

*

I want things to turn around

But there are always rocks in my way

I no longer want to be here

But you keep asking me to stay

*

Giving up seems like defeat

Continuing is so difficult

But I can't give anyone else the blame

When really it is all my fault

*

Which way do you go Taking the wrong way You end up with a tag on your toe...
Which way do you go Taking the wrong way You end up with a tag on your toe... | Source

Actions have consequences

What you do sets a path

The results are predictable

You do the math

*

An action for an action

A head for a head

If you choose the wrong way

It won't be long before your dead

*

When given the choice

Which way do you go

Taking the wrong way

You end up with a tag on your toe

*

Choose correctly

And you will see

I won't be around

Because you left without me

*

I seem to be stuck

In this situation non grada

When I am desperately in need

I always get nada

*

screaming at the world to let me be
screaming at the world to let me be | Source

I seek a new way

I'm trying to get out

I know I sound desperate

I really don't mean to pout

*

I want you to lead me

Please show me the way

I want out of the darkness

I want you to stay

*

I need that knight in shining armor

I want someone to rescue me

I am stuck in the darkness

Yet I just want to be set free

*

So here I sit, clearing my head

Screaming at the world to let me be

A fight to be dead

Or a fight to be free

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Harvey Stelman 5 years ago from Illinois

barber, Good job, there'a a lot of feeling in this. H


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

I used to write poetry all of the time, but kind of stopped for awhile. No reason really, except one day I stopped. I still enjoy it every once in awhile, but when I write it... it pretty much writes itself.

Glad you enjoyed it!


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Hi barbergirl28, I really liked this. Great poem.

Michael.


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Girl - your all that and a piece of cornbread:). Great job!


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

You should write more poetry, barber...you have the gift.


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

Thank you... I actually have a full book of poetry. Unfortunately, I don't know where it got buried underneath my millions of notebooks :) I used to write a poem a day before I went to bed. Some were good... some where not. I am starting to get back into it a little.


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SweetiePie 5 years ago from Southern California, USA

I enjoyed reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing!


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

Thanks...I am going to try and write more because I find it is a good release!


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

barbergirl, I felt your pain and frustration in each line...it kind of built as it went. I would like to encourage you to write daily again...being able to pen poetry that "write's itself" is a true gift...it would be a shame to ignore that gift, a shame for you, the writer, and a shame for us, the readers! Good job with this!


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

Thank you tnderhrt - that means alot. I have definately been trying to get back into my poetry a little more. Depending on my mood it is either serious and depressing or funny and off the wall. I guess there really is no inbetween for me there! Thanks for the awesome comment. It really means alot!


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BukowskiBabe 5 years ago from Somewhere in the middle of it all.

Beautiful and haunting.....love it.


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@BukowskiBabe - Thank you so much. This is one of my favorites that I have written. Very haunting and very much a personal struggle at times.


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BukowskiBabe 5 years ago from Somewhere in the middle of it all.

Have you ever taken the free test based on the Briggs Myers? I don't know if I can put links here or not, but it's online and I think you might enjoy the test. Bet your an Idealist...like myself


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@BukowskiBabe - I haven't taken the test by Briggs Myers. I would be interested to know what I am. I am going to have to check that out. I would love it if you could send me the link... I looked it up and there are lots and lots of pages with the tests.


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BukowskiBabe 5 years ago from Somewhere in the middle of it all.

Hi Barbergirl. I will send...let me know how it turns out.


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

I am an INFJ - I wasn't sure what that meant and then I looked at the description... I am an Idealist Counselor! You had me on the dot! Thanks for the information. That was fun!


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BukowskiBabe 5 years ago from Somewhere in the middle of it all.

You're welcome fellow INFJ!


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

:) Just got to smile at that!


anonymous 5 years ago

the moment you start believing the lemon is not bitter it stops being a lemon bg.so look at the brighter side is what i wanted to say after i read the first few lines but laterr mmmmmmmm it just floored me. great one bg


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icciev 5 years ago from Kuwait

Well done and amazing barber, thanks for sharing and voted up


Lisa Mae DeMasi 5 years ago

:) Let me tell ya, life has handed me a lot of lemons. In fact, I once hit a boulder just like that in the photo and ended up rolling my car into the Shoshone River in Wyoming. There I was, with my newly converted James Bond motorboat.


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@anonymous - I am glad this took you on a ride. It is a very strong poem about the struggles of life. Glad you enjoyed it.


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@icciev - Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it!


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@Lisa Mae DeMasi - Sometimes the struggle is difficult. We all have our lemons, it just depends on how we deal with them. I hope you don't turn cars into motorboats too often. Glad you enjoyed this!


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Sunshine625 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

Tell it like it is BBG! Well stated and appreciated! :)


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barbergirl28 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@Sunshine - Thanks so much. I get chills when I read this over.


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poshcoffeeco 4 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Great piece of Poetry. I keep having a dabble, but am no where near as good as you Stacy! More like this please.


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barbergirl28 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca Author

@poshcoffeeco - Awe... thanks so very much. Sometimes I get into a poetry kick and I just go with it! This is probably one of my favorite pieces! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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