Fill Me

Challenge me

take me on

undress me

take my armor off

free my body

of cover and clothes

touch my bare back

speak to my soul

pull me in

breathe me out

channel me

force me down

speak soft words

unguard my fears

fill me with you

pull my hair

caress my back

guide me through

and it not be a lie

whisper.....

"i love part of you."

reach inside me

and pull me out

kiss my demons

feel me shake

while i utter small cries

you cannot mistake

exchange of breath, wisdom, and prose...

On this level

i love you so.

hand in my hair

feet on your back

Shutter and cry

let me lay in the after

sweet songs of you

music heard only

when my naked chest

lay against yours.

methodically written

not always a rhyme

but always makes sense

if you have the real time.

and you really SEE me

you never just look

you read down to the soul

its what i love about you.

rush me again

Ive not had enough

if we owned just one night,

I'm certain

there couldn't be enough.

lay against me

feel me dream

let your scent

linger on me

bathe in me

ill bathe in you

wrap yourself around me

and hold me through.

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Elizabeth99 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

Very beautiful!! Good job! c:


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epigramman 5 years ago

.....I really don't think I've ever read anything like this before ....... you are definitely speaking my language - both body and soul - and on an aesthetic note - you are truly a brilliant writer - I feel kinda lightheaded right now - and that's a good thing!!!


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epigramman 5 years ago

This ......


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epigramman 5 years ago

..drives .......


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epigramman 5 years ago

....me....


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epigramman 5 years ago

...absolutely ....


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epigramman 5 years ago

...wild!!!!!!!!


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kirutaye 5 years ago from London, UK

What else is left to say? Lovely and very well written.


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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Definitely creative, that's for sure. :) Great Hub! Excellent work! And, I will most certainly have deeply interesting thoughts for a while now. :) Always a pleasure. :)


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

epigramman- love that you love it. what more can i say?

cagsil- i think your too much of a gentleman to tell me when my writing isnt up to par, but i thank you for commenting here. I dont care how this one is percieved, im standing behind it!


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

What an amazing poem, very sensual and moving. Pass the Kleenex! Heh! Rating up!


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zzron 5 years ago from Houston, TX.

Wow, with the exception of pulling your hair and kissing your demons, I suppose I could handle the rest, but the rest is certainly a tall order. LOL. Great job!


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Cheeky Girl- thank you, i feel like you mean that. And thanx for rating me up, i cant get passed a damn 96 to save my life these past months! what am i at now, 91? oh well, ill just have to remember my mantra. "doing this for me...doing this for me..." lol.

zzron- oh youll fill it...youll fill ALL OF IT!!!! hahaha


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sam3m 5 years ago from New York

pink,

really fine! your writing is becoming more sensuous with each piece. an excellent direction from my perspective. i await your next.


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puresilence 5 years ago from New Delhi

Amazingly beautiful.. I guess u r gaining urself after a long pause.. u have amazing creativity skills.. keep penning


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

yes, a pause.


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vydyulashashi 5 years ago from Hyderabad,India

Beautiful hub.

God Bless You!


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Jane Bovary 5 years ago from The Fatal Shore

That's fantastic Pink Umbrella. Very romantic and very sexy.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

thank you my lovely jane bovary.


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

This is absolutely , unquestionably, sensual. Very well written. I wonder if the 'bear' back was really meant to be a 'bare' back or was it an intentional poetic license? Well done, pink.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

nope, it was supposed to be bare back, i was writing faster than my thought could go, and spellcheck didnt see the spelling didnt go with the content. but that was the most gentle way anyone has ever corrected me, so thank you!


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Hi the pink umbrella, I commented on a hub of yours yesterday and you said if i liked that i would need to hold onto my seat. Well this definitely takes it up a notch or two. This is great. Really sexy and sensual poem

Michael.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

thank you michael ely! Want some exciting news? someone said i should write a book...think im starting today. All will be right, its going to rain, and i have alot of time to myself today. So i figure instead of going out and spending money i dont have, ill start my novel.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

So what do you think your novel will be about the pink umbrella? All the best with it. Michael.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

well, i didnt have the calming day that i thought i would, but thats always how it works out. I will be up late tonight cooking up ideas, though. Im somewhere between something slightly autobiographical, and something totally fictional. It will of course have me all over it in one way or another.

by the way people, i made a vanilla pie today from scratch, and the best i can say about it is that it definately tastes like vanilla.


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well my heart still beats wildly madly and glady when I read this - and yes you fill me with such poetic desire that it just may lead to carnal desires of the flesh - in the flesh .......


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

as does my heart when i read any comments, messages, or emails from you. Do not be mistaken in thinking your the only one guilty of desire.....im only human, and with your intelligence, great writing, awesome sense of humor, and ability to compliment me like ive never been complimented before, has me saying....hmmm might be time for a little vacation!


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Neil Sperling 5 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

Moving and stimulating


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

i can feel the passion here!


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

okay, so this is my hub with the most views. hmmm

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