Filling an Emptiness Poem

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It was a hollow

Devoid of sense

A deep hole

With exhausted bowl


Though, its glory blossom

From the interior

But it worth seems invalid,

An expression constrained


Energy at its peak

Seeking, just a way

But vacuity stream within

Even as a prey.


Autonomy, an extreme price

Withholding all, to itself

A suppose prize

Into an advancing rise


But in a fusing

Even of minds

Joining in its abstract

Crowns the glory


A virtual enhancement

Even of a fortress

Into an astonishing glory

The prize for a life

The cost of existence

A cavity, one for each

A place of fulfillment

Filling an emptiness



Abba Elijah also known as elijagod (elija_god)

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abbaelijah 2 weeks ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks always exploring !


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

I strive fulfillment and your words are so meaningful and with greatness.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

You are welcome BLOSSOM SB !

Thanks for the comment


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Great poem! Enjoyed reading it. God bless you.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Eddy, thanks for coming around to read and comment on "filling an emptiness " i appreciate you

May our good lord continually bless you


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A wonderful read ;thank you for sharing and I vote up, across and share for sure.

Eddy.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks always exploring for the comment !

You are been very supportive and encouraging to me as a poet.

Trully, BIG THANKS !


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

I clicked all the buttons. Your words are powerful. Fulfillment is what we all strive for. Thank you.....

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