Final Goodbye- a poem

Final Good-Bye

Can you believe am finally

Over the things which haunted me for years?

Feels like am finally blessed & have over come my fears.

Time has indeed been such a friend.

It slowly healed my wounds & put my agony to an end.

The hole in my heart given by you, Is finally being closed.

The feelings I had for you are being washed away,

Which you always chose to ignore.

You were my past, your memories were blocking my coming future

But now, I'm gonna let your memories fade

And let you go out of my life's picture.

Things had been worst with me for past some years

But now I'm gonna embrace things as they come in cheers.

I know its not gonna be easy to bid all your memories good-bye

But I can't destroy my future by not doing so

And so i shall atleast give it a try..

No matter where I go you'll always remain a part of me.

But this little part of you which I'm gonna take-

I'll make sure it never hurts me.

I wanted you & only you

But now things have changed & So has my destiny.

I'll always remember you in a harmful way

Bcuz you've made me stronger by going away.

So Good luck with ur life-I hope atleast this time things turn out right!

Good-bye to the part of you that I'm leaving behind

Thanks for having met me,

You'll always remain my precious find...

© Copyright Hajira Ehsan

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gothicpoet 6 years ago

yeah i know the feeling of remembering someone in a harmful narcissitic way, i love you but love myself more, good for you that your love was not a true one and you never meant it when you said it..

easy for those sorts to move along, when they can say things they never meant to begin with

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mio cid 6 years ago from Uruguay

time is such a potent medicine, there is nothing it can't heal

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Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore Author

I beleive the same Mio but I wish time didn't ve to take so much time to heal a broken heart..

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gothicpoet 6 years ago

people in love will solve their problems to keep it...sounds like that did not happen for you..

i know i went through it, a man refused to solve his problem by keeping me a secret and denying his real identity

i had to move along because he refuses to acknowledge that this is his issue and not mine

i am not going to be ashamed of publically any longer or denied being loved or desired

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Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@Gothic poet-Love or not, it hurts to say Good bye to someone you surrendered ur life to.. It hurts to Say Good BYe to someone You were so close to , whether or not you were meant to be.. The pain the end of any relationship causes,is the most excruciating agony one can feel...

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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Very pretty Cracknutcase! Write it all out my dear. God bless!

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Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore Author

Thanks Micky :)

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Twilight Lawns 6 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

I like this very much. I read it a couple of weeks ago, and wonder why I didn't comment then. It's very sad.

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Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore Author

Twilight- Saying Good-Bye is always sad My dear! But sometimes we've to do it for our own well being..

Thank You for stopping by :)

God bless ya!

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Johnny Love 5 years ago

Please don't take this to heart. I find your words so beautiful, but within them is not how you feel. Your heart may never forget and I know the hole will not go away. You look so long in life to find your puzzle piece to complete who you are and accent your movements. I see so much hope for you if only you open your heart to see what has been inside of you for so long, LOVE! Take it for it is a blessing that not all will find nor understand. I vote this up and beautiful because it is. I just feel you are much more than you can see. Blessed be, Johnny Love

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jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Theres always a poem or a story in lifes little painful lessons , what doesnt kill you 'allows you to write extremely well " :) haha! cool iindeed , write on girlie ! thanks for sharing :)

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tom hellert 5 years ago from home


My experience is "nothing good comes easy, and nothing easy is usually good". I believe in reincarnation- I think we come back till we almost get it right.. I know as a Christian its not accepted but- I just have that feeling....That this is not " my first Rodeo". yet slowly but surely i am thinking it may be my lat "tour of Duty"-or darn close to it. BUT OTHERS MAY SAY OTHERWISE...


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ashish04joshi 4 years ago from India

It's sad to know something like this. And I guess everybody has gone through this pain some time in their life.

I've myself been in dumps for I can relate to it so much.

Thanks for this.

Beautiful and up.

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LadyFiddler 4 years ago from Somewhere in the West

The good thing about broken hearts they help us to grow in a way we never thought we would. I've grown and matured so much after my heart break in 2007 that i can only see the GOOD , God wanted for me.

I thank Him so much for letting it all happen now i can help someone heal their heart to.

Writing has a way of letting oour emotions out it makes us feel so much better

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem

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Pinklady1350 4 years ago from Illinois

Good for you

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