Find You

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On the brake down

What do you see

Wanting to be

Near you

Not rushing

Not wanting to jump

On the edge

Where are you

What do you see

Do you want me to find you

Where are you

Should I break down

To find you

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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

intense!


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Btrbell. :)


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Great words ; I vote up and share.

Eddy.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Awesome and nicely done.Voted up.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Powerful! Very nice.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Hauntingly written, deep...I liked it!!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful and emotional.


Valleypoet 3 years ago

Intense and emotional write...voted awesome:-))


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Eiddwen thank you. :)

Hi James thank you. :)

Hi Wayne thank you. :)

Hi Ruby thank you. :)

Hi Gypsy thank you. :)

Hi Valleypoet thank you. :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love the flow and emotional journey here. Your writing is always wonderful, Caroline.


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Astra. I always appreciate your visit. :)

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