Liquid Gold

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Like liquid gold your words flow...
They seer and, thus, inspire
this heart, rendered defenseless,
to caress of your desire.

Like liquid gold, your words flow...
sweet intoxicating wine
that renders this heart powerless,
in star-struck state of mind.

Like liquid gold, your words flow...
spill into a hungry heart...
captured by the essence of
a bliss it can't impart.

Like liquid, gold your words flow...
that seer and so inspire
this heart rendered defenseless
to succumb to your desire.

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dianeaugust 5 years ago from Tennessee

Liquid Gold so beautifully said. I love that metaphor--it feels warm and rich and like love--it feels like love. Thank you for these words so well written, so poetic, so true!

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

dianeaugust, thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it and commented. It means so much!

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geoffbot 5 years ago from costa rica

I really like this piece. I love it actually.

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

geoffbot, I am thrilled! Thanks so much for stopping and for the awesome comment!

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Aha,Golden you are.Loved it.

Marina Lester 5 years ago

Awesome!!!! Candle light desire, perfectly written! :D

"to succumb to your desire." ... hmm, very nice.

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