Force of nature

Forces of Nature/ Poem

When we first met it

struck me to the core.

I've never met anyone

whose done that before.

When I'm not with you

I see the rain fall.

When I think of you

I hear thunder call.

When I touch you

I feel lightening strike.

Between us the

electricity ignites.

Your element is Air

and mine is Earth.

When these powers collide

it unfolds life's worth.

I guess between us

you can call us storm chasers.

Because what draws us

together is Forces of nature.

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Mystique Scorpio 6 years ago from Edmonton Alberta ;)

Really good :)


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4elements 6 years ago Author

Thank you, and Thank you for following my hubs. it means alot to get feed back from people.


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bluejay900 6 years ago

That was great! You're awesome at rhyming poetry, it totally created a picture in my head.


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ash_tiger07 5 years ago from North Carolina, US

This was great! It really does get people a the core. Blessed Be!


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

you have a true gift of words, this was an amazing poem of passion and chemistry, well done


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you nighthag. It is always wonderful hearing from you. Blessings

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