Forever ...Comes in Time.....

It's alright my love
lay your head right below
I will ask not what you expect of all men
believe me I know

Your tears are stronger today than
the last ones you cried
Is it the days unmeasured
or the hours implied

Tell me ...tell me .....
that is why I'm here
When your heart flies away ....I wish you to
fly with no fear

No worries no promises just the
soft sway of the hour
Sleep my dear.......... sleep away
awaken within the power

Moments grow into an hour and an hour
blooms into a day
Just a flower marks the passage of
emotions along your way

What does time think it is anyway ?
How dare it lose its shine
Unmoving moments make little difference
forever comes in time

You awaken with a new smile and leave
at dawn .........shining
Did you go sooner than promised
as I check your timing

Its my turn to look to the mantle
the hours now dragging away
That figures so well ....the rolls are reversed
a few hours cannot stay

If I could ...just when you were here
I would have stopped all those hands
The seconds the moments the hours
until forever understands















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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Just to be able to still time to let the moment last. I am enthralled by those words of yours....keep writing my friend.

Hugs


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Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

Oh, so lovely!! So filled with yearning, and the power of love.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , Thank you , what would I do without the thrill I get from all that niceness!......:-} Your picture looks soo thoughtful. What was going on there?.....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Paradise thank you dear lady, the powers of the hours.......:-}


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Aha, The clock keeps on ticking, ticking, away. Will she come back to stay? I hope so. Very beautiful ahorseback.


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

If I could ...just when you were here

I would have stopped all those hands

The seconds the moments the hours

until forever understands

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What could be more beautiful?


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Always Exploring , Just a muse from some place in time. I spent too long on the 'watching the clock' side of relationships . But no more.......:-} Thank you .


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Qudsia , Thank you my dear girl, Im trying to write like you!..He He...:-}


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Beautiful hunnie, I could feel the tears start to tickle at the back of my eyes while reading, you always manage to provoke emotion from me with your awesome words. x


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

The blue star , Hello ,yes for once I'm able to move a woman to tears ....LOL. Seriously thank you so much.......:-}


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chspublish 5 years ago from Ireland

There is great comfort in your words. You certainly have that magical gift of drawing the reader into your world of weaving words and images.


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

This is real poetry - in so many ways. It's all thrilling, but my favorite lines are:

" No worries no promises just the? soft sway of the hour? Sleep my dear.......... sleep away ?awaken within the power"

There is some beautiful rhythm in all the poem. The pictures are lovely too!


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

"Until forever understands' ...oh so beautifully written and true ,and heartfelt , thanks for sharing this beauty votted up and awesome and beautiful , you are an amazing poet :)


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

I don't know how those question marks (?) got in my quote of your lines! I didn't insert them! Hm. . . Very puzzling. Sorry 'bout that.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

CHSpublish, Thank you my friend , It's alway nice to know when and how you touch someone ,and that you do ! You are well over there across the sea I hope?.....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Nellieanna , Thank you so much!, the pictures are in a state forest in the Northest Kingdom of Vermont , all dirt roads and treelines , mountains and the beauty of quietness , "and a river runs through it ".......:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you Jami, And you are way to kind to my scribbling thoughts and ways.lol....:-}


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Brilliant as always and you know how to keep a reader's interest.

Here's to many more.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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b. Malin 5 years ago

I loved that last paragraph, so Poignant and oh so Beautifully said, Ahorseback. A big WOW to you my friend.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Eiddwen , Thank you so much , your right ,heres to a lot more.....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

BMalin , thank you so much my friend!.......nice of you to share!...:-}


daddysgirl 5 years ago

This is just beautiful dad!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you sweety pie, Love you big bunches...oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo :-}

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