Forever Sixteen

I'm

forever sixteen

with dove's eyes

I'm

so clean

so pristine

forever sixteen


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

whatever teens we have pass through we never feel we are. Yes always sixteen we believe it is in us.

Cheers


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi Rose, it would be so nice to be sixteen again,even for only one day!

Great poem,well done !

Vote up and more !!!


mours sshields 4 years ago from Elwood, Indiana

Cute poem!!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

Short and sweet but totally complete! Voted up for the wonderful thoughts it evokes, hopefully, in all of us.


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schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA Author

Thank you all very much :)!


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

short and sweet, awesome


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schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA Author

Thank you my friend, hope your day is great!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

School girl.. how precious is this.. simply wonderful

I am sharing this gem

Debbie


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blondey 3 years ago

Hi Debbie

I'm honored that you pinned this :)

Thank you

Rose


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

this is really awesome piece!


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schoolgirlforreal 3 years ago from USA Author

Thank you unknown spy, appreciate the visit and comment!

:)

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