Forgivness and love -a poem

Don't let an argument
lie on a bed of nails.
In the morning our
memories will spit venom,
the door will slam and
the weight of a thousand
weeping souls,
will sit heavily upon
our shoulders,
day and night,
until the wind blows lightly
to calm the storm and
the door re-opens and
the light will cradle our
embracing faces and
together our eyes will
speak in solitude of
forgiveness and love.

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blondepoet 6 years ago from australia

How true that is. They say we should never go to bed angry....yea I believe in forgiving too....unforgiving really consumes you with so much crap...it's not the easiest thing to do, but it definitely saves your soul.


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Sherbet Penny 6 years ago from Galway, Ireland. Author

Agree, you have to give stubbornness the boot too and I have certainly learned my lessons along the way, thank you for comment.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

b e a u t i f u l. Don't let the sun set in a provoked state, is the biblical version of this, Wise words, loving your work, wow


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Sherbet Penny 6 years ago from Galway, Ireland. Author

Thank you again poetlorraine.


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia

I love this poem!


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Sherbet Penny 6 years ago from Galway, Ireland. Author

Thank you stricktlydating.


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MissRio 6 years ago from Vero Beach

nice work, forgiveness is the way to embrace all other emotions and LOVe.. There is only LOve Ultimately..:)


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Sherbet Penny 6 years ago from Galway, Ireland. Author

Very true MissRio, thank you.


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Leptirela 6 years ago from I don't know half the time

:) aaah peace.... you only find it after you forgive , this lil selection of words you married there , its wonderfull I love your style :)


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Sherbet Penny 6 years ago from Galway, Ireland. Author

Thank you Leptirela, much appreciated.

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