Forgotten Fields (poem)


Forgotten fields now lost in snow

Which saw such Joy so long ago

When in our hearts such youth did flow

In music of I love you so

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And smiles were ready to explain

The wonderment of each refrain

Of blossoms left there in our lain

In paradise which we maintain

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We danced through life like gentle snow

And lavished in each sweet refrain

There hand in hand we met each lain

In meadows of I love you so

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So long was life waves to explain

Of things we tried and had ago

As lane took us on odd new flow

What’s clear became hard to maintain

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Now here we sit so lost in so

Two victims of pure passion’s flow

Rich memories not long ago

Forgotten fields now lost in snow

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Memories are beautiful looking back on life together makes you wonder or thin even more about so many things. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

The snow will melt and the forgotten fields will once again show!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Such sadness. Memories, to me, are actually like the fallen snow.

When the snow melts there is nothing left.

DJ.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Your words are sad, moving and quite beautiful. Voted up!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Such sweet beauty awaits us in our thoughts when we walk down memory lane no doubt!

Voted up and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Nostalgia. It can be quite sad, but beautiful at the same time.


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

'Tis a beauty, but alas a new spring has come ;-)

Cat


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work.


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

A lovely heartfelt poem. Great write.


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Sad... but beautiful!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Sadly lovely. Passing this on.


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Fossillady 3 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Forgotten fields now lost in snow

Which saw such joy so long ago

When in our hearts such youth did flow

In music of I love you so

Exquisite . . .


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Love is something that we must always work on, and these instances so often happen. Your keen eye on human nature is so well attuned.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

A beautiful poem Martin, the sun will shine when you rendezvous under a tree at Skylawns.

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