Poem: Fragments of a Dream

Fragments of a Dream



Fragments of a Dream stutter my sleep

Memories or myths buried so deep

Places I’ve never been, Faces I’ve never seen

Drift across in a luminous sheen


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Who are you that haunts my nights

Just in the shadows. teasing the lights

Tears I’ve never shed, lying in my rumpled bed

Melancholy fills my aching head


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Something about your face draws me close

There’s an invitation in your brows

Lips I’ve never kissed whisper things that I’ve missed

A feeling of loss I cannot resist


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Were you with me in another life

Were you my love, my loss, my strife

Answers I’ll never get, questions I’ll never ask

As I wake up to assume this life’s mask


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Mohan Kumar

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sameerk 5 years ago from India

nice one


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thanks!


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mothercristina 5 years ago

nice!


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

oh i liked this one

beautifully mysterious, great work!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thanks mothercristina for dropping in.

nighthag, appreciate your comments as always.


kimberlyslyrics 5 years ago

so beautiful

A real treat to start my day

thank you

xo


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Kim ( can I call you that?), may you Day get better and better. thanks for dropping in. xo


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Ashantina 5 years ago

When are you going to publish your book of poems! You're v good! :)


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Ashantina, I am glad you think they're publishable. I should look into it...Thanks!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is very beautiful your poetry of a special dream.

Cheers


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Pixienot 5 years ago from Clarksville, Indiana

I really enjoyed this poem. You have good alliteration. So important in passing along emotion in your work.

Great job!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

@always exploring - thanks very much for your appreciation.

@Pixienot - I am pleased you enjoyed this, thanks for dropping by.

Cheers!


cmaree 5 years ago

This is really nice. I enjoyed reading it.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota

You really have a way with poetry writing. I loved how this poem made me feel. Great job:)


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thanks cmaree .. glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you Minnetonka Twin, nice to know you the poem connected. thanks for dropping by.


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Shalini Kagal 5 years ago from India

That was wonderful - and you've captured the feeling of the the space between the dream world and the real world so well!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Shalini, very much appreciate your comments. Thanks for dropping by.


shygirl2 5 years ago

So romantic, even if it was like in a dream! :D


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK Author

Thanks, shygirl- appreciate it :-)


PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

I like !!!


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DanaTeresa 4 years ago from Ohio

I love your poetry so much I couldn't resist reading one more before I got up from my computer. This one nearly made me cry - stuttered sleep, something so close yet never to be had, waking to a masked life. Intense and Absolutley Beautiful. Thank you for sharing your gift.


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Daisy Mariposa 3 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Mohan (Docmo),

Your poetry is so beautiful! You paint the most amazing visual images with your words.


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CloudExplorer 3 years ago from New York City

Awesome poem bro, thanks to some friends on Laurinzo's Poetry Place group on FB, which was where I located it.

Yes indeed sweet dreams of that significant other use to be on my mental forecast as well many years back (Today I'm living it with my wife night and day, what a dream come true right, true love!), nicely written, and I'm sharing this one for sure. Nice!

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