Free Verse Rhyming Love Poetry Original Write


Passions Lamentaton

My lips move to speak yet my thoughts won’t release

any words can’t be formed at this time.

So, I let out a breath

and step back in to check

what clearly had been on my mind.

I sigh and regress to the thoughts I thought best

to deliver through air

aid us to repair

a love no other commenced hand in hand with “I Do.”

The rapid pulses along each day

seemed to end and escape us along the way.

At moments this whole heart feels wrecked

purely in constant regret.

Love needs to mend in adoration taking one small step.

Call the wild beast in me idiotic, irrational or admit

we are done

yet keep this thought I cannot speak,

I will love you till I visit my last setting sun.

Copyright June 2012 DZ

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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

a beautiful poem.. I love poetry and this is beautiful..

Blessings to you


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coffeegginmyrice 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

It is beautiful, Denizee! Thumbs up for Beautiful! That is true passion for love. The Kenny G. music brings back memories when I had young nights listening to jazz until the break of morning until radio DJs change shifts.

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carriethomson 3 years ago from United Kingdom

"Love" is the universal truth is the beautiful feeling and God give us love to heal us.

Very beautiful poem.....your effort works

keeping sharing feeling with us

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Denizee 3 years ago Author

Hi - Sorry for the delay in responding to your comments but I'm not getting my alerts when comments are posted - I've just manual come to my page and realized people were still reading this. Thank you all - for your wonderful comments - and glad some memories and feelings were stirred as you read this.

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epigramman 3 years ago

....Love is hard thing to describe at times - ironic - because there are so many love poems and love songs written each day in the history of the world but you certainly captured the very essence here with your poetic train of thought and your sacred words. Sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 5:40am

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Denizee 3 years ago Author

Thank you; and yes love is very hard to write about - So I worked this one out the best I could and am happy you enjoyed it - !

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ROBERTHEWETTSR 3 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

Beautiful poem Denizee. I love to write romantic poems and stories too.

I will be be back as often as possible to read more of your beautiful writing.

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