Girl in the Rain

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Once there was a girl who was walking under the rain

Alone

Soaked up

Tears flowing on her face with the rain drops


Thunders rumbling

She got more scared

Lightning striking

Still she walked alone


Along the way

She met someone

Quite hard to explain

But she forgot the gray sky

There were sunshine and rainbows

Fireflies and butterflies

She realized she burned again


The rain fell again

This time washing away the fire

Flames of love turned to ashes

Once again, there she was…


Walking under the rain

Alone and soaked up

Tears flowing on her face with the rain drops


Flashbacks of dancing under the rain

With the reason of her smile

Didn’t care who could see ‘em

Swirling round and round

Once there was a girl who loved the rain so much


Sweet memories couldn’t bring back the smile

Warm tears flowed instead

Breaking her gentle heart

Coz no more dancing now


Once there was a girl

Who loved dancing in the rain

Hope she could burn again….



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Comments 45 comments

Micky Dee profile image

Micky Dee 6 years ago

This is very nice. There's nothing like love or the absence that helps words flow. They sometimes intermingle with tears. Thanks for beautiful poetry.


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

Really well written for such personal and heartbreaking content. So, So, good. peace.x


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

last time I saw you, you were in Jealous avenue :)

yup yup words flow much often when the heart squeeze..THANKS so much for the beautiful comments Micky! :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

so so good to see you here :) Thank you Dim. God bless :)


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peptalk 6 years ago

This is nice...

The tears and rain are great imagery.


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Tammy Lochmann 6 years ago

Cry in the rain so no one notices.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks a lot peptalk and Tammy :) Yah, the rain, no matter what,is a beautiful imagery..


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

This is a pretty little poem!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

wow, thanks CM :) always good to see you


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Karen Russell 6 years ago

I JUST LOVE YOUR POETRY, THANKS FOR SHARING...


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Cheeky Girl pointed me in this direction. Wow! Strong and beautiful images of the girl in the rain. That sense of being left in the moment and we are at its mercy, somehow. I like the message at the end too.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@KR

thanks so much :)

@Cathy

I have to thank your Cheeky Girl for pointing you up to my hubs :) I gotta read yours, too..It is nice meetin you two.

glad you liked it. THANKS again Cath! :)


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA

"Sweet memories couldn’t bring back the smile" - What a powerful expression! I really loved it!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

ow thank you Cupid :)


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Lovely poem, blaise! :) you take us on quite a heartfelt journey. I love the rain and it's great to incorporate the imagery. Enjoyable to captrure other perspectives of it too. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hello Invictus! I missed you ;p Ah, the rain..quite interesting to draw lots of perspective. But my fave would be curling up under the sheets during rainy days lol

Thanks my friend! :)


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Loved its simple words, very well done...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks Moulik Mistry :)


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Lovely poem, great imagery - keep writing more...


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needs_a_break 6 years ago

oh wow i loved it!! simple yet profound... hmm i doubt i spelt that right oh well lol.. but ya.. i loved it, it had so much feeling and depth, i loved the msg as well can't wait to read more :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Moulik

you're here again :)

@needs_a_break

you spelled it right ;) glad you liked it. Thanks so much.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

I thought I'd wander over and say HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-QT!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks my sweet friend Mik! :) Happy V day!


cosette 6 years ago

cool, Blaise...


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kennynext 6 years ago from Everywhere

A great poem that all should enjoy


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you kennynext :)


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Kavita Trivedi 5 years ago from London

This is beautiful though, you may want to slightly edit a couple of words to help this flow better. Something like:

Once there was a girl, walking in the rain

Alone

Soaked up

Tearful rain drops flowing on her face

Rumbling thunder

She got scared

Lightning strikes

Still, she walked alone

Just my opinion of course, but either way, this is a very powerful piece and I enjoyed this very much


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Kavita :) You're a very good editor ;)


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very sad but beautiful, enjoyed.

Cheers


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Cheers! Thanks Always Exploring ;)


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Karrak 5 years ago from Michigan

Beautiful poem!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you :)


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

beautiful, heartbreaking imagery, a lovely poem !


nishu 5 years ago

nice


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Two Poles 5 years ago from Morgantown, West Virginia

So will be the love of my life...great work!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much :)


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

I hope this isn't an autobiography... and that you are dancing again... it's a brilliant poem, because it is so real... and one that many can relate to these days... Hope you are well and staying warm this winter night


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Yes it was..and it's been so long ago. I think we all have gone through those moments. I'm so happy with my life now..and yes, dancing again :) It's amazing to know what readers see in a poem. It's like seeing a part of who they are. Thank you, Wolf :)


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Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

Your poetry has many layers and meanings running through it. Interesting and thought provoking. I hope you have rainbows in your sky now :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm trying to put intrigue once in a while hehe. I'm glad you like it, Anna. Yes, there are rainbows in my life now and more beside. Have a sweet day!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Awesome poetry with great meaning, and you did it so well


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Veronicarain 3 years ago from Cincinnati, Ohio

Great poetry is just flowing and I am so glad I started a hubpage. You make me have to read it twice because it just gives you stacks of thought provoking enjoyment. Have a great weekend.


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foemeno 2 years ago from New York

DID YOU EVEN RE READ THIS, i can tell, why would i ever finish reading it?


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Dark Heart 2 years ago

Oooh-that poem hurt it was so good.


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Joy56 2 years ago

Love love love it.... Beautiful...... You know the feeling you get when you read a beautiful poem..... I have it x 10

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